I have a problem that I need to talk over with you because it's difficult for me to talk to my parents.I don't think they understand me.There is one thing that is important to me at the moment.I want to be happier.My parents don't let me go out with my friends very often and I often feel bored.Can you please tell me what to do?
Yours,
Kim
【分析】高分句型一
I have some advice which may help you. 我有些也许对你有帮助的建议,这是which 引导的定语从句,先行词是advice. 高分句型二
I hope the suggestions will help you.我希望这些建议会对你有所帮助.这是一个宾语从句,I hope是主句,后面的是宾语从句. 【解答】Dear Kim,
I'm glad to hear from you and I know what bothers you now. According to what you said in the letter. I have some advice which may help you【高分句型一】【开头点明主题】 Firstly, if you want to hang out with your friends, you should tell your parents where you go and when you will come back, they need to be sure that you safe with your friends. Besides, make sure that they can contact you wherever you go, or they may be go crazy, which may lead to the chance that you are not allowed to go out with your friends. Moreover, the reason why your parents forbid you to go out lies in that they may think it will distract you from study, so you have to explain to them that hanging out with friends is a good way to relief the stress from study, and next time your parents may understand you. 【正文部分详细介绍自己的建议】 In brief, I hope the suggestions will help you【高分句型二】.【结尾紧扣主题】