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大作文（来自http://www.yledu.net.cn/Article/chinaEdu/200909/11016.html）

【思路点拨】

1. 概括短文的要点：越来越多的未毕业的中学生去国外留学深造（more and more young students before graduation of middle school go abroad for further study）以及由此激起了人们的热议（inspires a great debate）。

2.人们对中学生留学的态度：海外留学是好还是坏（Is it good or bad）；有好多优势（many advantages）；遇到好多挑战（come across a series of challenges）。

3. 中学生留学对他们正负面的影响：教会他们独立和适应新的环境（teach them to be independent and more adaptable to new environment）；作为文化交流的使者（act as mediators between different peoples)；学习更先进的知识（more advanced knowledge）；更迅速地学习一门外语（a foreign language more quickly）；远离他们的父母（far away from their parents）；没有足够多的中国朋友（don’t have enough Chinese friends）；感到孤独和想家，事事自己处理（feel lonely and homesick and deal with everything by themselves）；对父母是一个巨大经济负担（a great economic burden to their parents）；他们也未必能取得巨大成就（they’re not sure to make a great achievement）。

4. 如何对待中学生留学：既然国内可以享受同样的教育，为什么他们还要麻烦去国外学习呢？（Since students can enjoy education of the same quality in China, why should they bother to study abroad?）；海外学习是好还是坏取决于个人的条件（whether it’s good or not to study abroad depends on the individual.）。

在写作表达上尽量避免多次使用同一个句型，适当地采用多种句型，增加一些连接词汇使自己的文章看起来表达得体，语言流利。

【范文赏析】

With the development of society, more and more young students before graduation of middle school go abroad for further study which inspires a great debate on whether they should do like this.

Is it good or bad to study abroad? Attending schools abroad has many advantages. The living experience may teach them to be independent and more adaptable to new environment. They can act as mediators between different peoples, learn much more advanced knowledge and a foreign language more quickly. However, they’ll come across a series of challenges. They’re far away from their parents and don’t have enough Chinese friends. So, they may

feel lonely and homesick and deal with everything by themselves. Studying abroad is also a great economic burden to their parents. Moreover, they’re not sure to make a great achievement. Since students can enjoy education of the same quality in China, why should they bother to study abroad?

Therefore, whether it’s good or not to study abroad depends on the individual. 【经典表达】

一、在描写留学的时候常用的短语有：

1. go abroad for further study (到海外深造) 2. study abroad（留学） 3. new environment (新环境) 4. act as(作为)。

5. learn a foreign language more quickly（更快地学习一门外语） 6. feel lonely and homesick (感到孤独和想家) 二、在描写健康的时候常用的句型有：

1. Is it good or bad??（??是好还是坏？）

2. However, they’ll come across?（然而他们将遇到??） 3. Moreover, they’re not sure to? (此外，他们也不能保证??) 4. whether it’s good or not ... （它是好还是坏??） 【举一反三】

1. 并不是每一个学生都适合到海外深造。 2. 留学并不代表你的成功。

3. 到海外留学的学生必须面临着适应新环境。 4. 留学生可以作为文化交流的使者。

5. 如果我们能够在一个外语的环境里，我们能够更快地学习一门外语。 6. 当我们远离家乡和父母的时候，我们会感到孤独和想家。 7. 出国留学是好还是坏还没有作出定论吗？ 8. 然而，在国外什么样的事情他们都可能碰到。 9. 此外，他们也不能保证每一个人都能成功。 10. 它是好还是坏不能由我们说了算。 [举一反三]

1. Not every student is suitable to go abroad for further study. 2. Studying abroad doesn’t stand for your success.

3. The students who study abroad are faced to suit new environment.

4. The students studying abroad may act as mediators for cultures.

5. If we can study in a foreign language environment, we can learn a foreign language more quickly.

6. When we get away from our hometown and our parents, we can feel lonely and homesick. 7. Is it good or bad to study abroad that has not been made a decision? 8. However, they’ll come across anything abroad. 9. Moreover, they’re not sure to make everyone success. 10. Whether it is good or bad isn’t decided by us.