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(山西省曲沃中学高一期末) Dear Ms.Smith，

I appreciate your help very much.On the first day of camp，you came up to myself while I was sitting alone.After that，you always gave me specially attention and encouraged to me to join in activities.As the result，I gradually got to know the other campers.Because the help you gave me that summer，my life changed.I gained so much confidence that I go back to school as a new person.My grades improved.I became very active but made new friends.Today，I got a letter that said I had been admitting into a college.I am proud of it.I just want to thank you for helping me becoming a different person.

答案： Dear Ms.Smith，

I appreciate your help very much.On the first day of ∧ camp，you came up to myself

themewhile I was sitting alone.After that，you always gave me specially attention and encouraged to specialme to join in activities.As the result，I gradually got to know the other campers.Because ∧ the

aofhelp you gave me that summer，my life changed.I gained so much confidence that I go back to

wentschool as a new person.My grades improved.I became very active but made new friends.Today，

andI got a letter that said I had been admitting into a college.I am proud of it.I just want to thank you

admittedfor helping me becoming a different person.

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(东北育才学校高一期末)

导学号 57144333

导学号 57144332

My dream school starts at 8：30 a．m.and ends at 3：30 p．m..They are three lessons in the morning and two in the afternoon.We didn't need to do so many homework.Therefore ，we have more time with after-school activities.For example，we can do reading for one and a half hour and take exercise for one hour every day.

My dream school look like a big garden.There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest，sit by the lake and listening music.The teachers here are kind and helpfully.They are not only our teachers but also our friends.

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looksaround the classroom buildings.We can lie on the grass for a rest，sit by the lake and listening

sitting∧ music.The teachers here are kind and helpfully.They are not only our teachers but also our tohelpfulfriends.

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(辽宁省葫芦岛市一中高一下学期期末)

导学号 57144334

Today anyone can enjoy a luxury of owning a private car—if he can afford one.And be able to afford it，you have first of all to pay for a five or six figure sums to buy a machine.Even the toy like Fiat(菲亚特) costs anything like 20,000yuan.Some good cars will cost hundreds of times that many.But however large this initial sum you have to pay，the real drain on your purse have not come，in the running and maintenance of the machine—the various taxes，the fuel，or of course the repairs.The last item especial is a bottomless trap.Any single repair may cost him thousands.

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Today anyone can enjoy a luxury of owning a private car—if he can afford one.And ∧

thetobe able to afford it，you have first of all to pay for a five or six figure sums to buy a

summachine .Even the toy like Fiat(菲亚特) costs anything like 20,000yuan.Some good cars will

somethingcost hundreds of times that many.But however large this initial sum you have to pay，the real

muchdrain on your purse have not come，in the running and maintenance of the machine—the various

hastaxes，the fuel，or of course the repairs.The last item especial is a bottomless trap.Any single

andespeciallyrepair may cost him thousands. you四

导学号 57144336

My grandparents live in the countryside.They keep a dog calling Ah Bao.One day my grandparents go to work in the fields，taking along my little brother and Ah Bao.My brother and

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Ah Bao came to a river nearby and enjoyed himself.My brother was trying to catch a butterfly while he fell into a river.Ah Bao barked and immediate jumped into the water.Hearing about him barking，my grandparents hurried there and saw Ah Bao swimming towards the bank carrying my brother.Ah Bao did all he could save my little brother，that moved all the people present.Everyone praised Ah Bao for his brave and kindness.

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My grandparents live in the countryside.They keep a dog calling Ah Bao.One day my

calledgrandparents go to work in the fields，taking along my little brother and Ah Bao.My brother

wentand Ah Bao came to a river nearby and enjoyed himself.My brother was trying to catch a

themselvesbutterfly while he fell into a river.Ah Bao barked and immediate jumped into the

whentheimmediatelywater.Hearing about him barking，my grandparents hurried there and saw Ah Bao swimming towards the bank carrying my brother .Ah Bao did all he could ∧ save my little brother，that

towhichmoved all the people present.Everyone praised Ah Bao for his brave and kindness. bravery五

(威海市二模)

导学号 57144337

I have never been to a cooking school.I learned cooking from my mother because she was really interesting in teaching me how to cook.The main reason for this was because my mother didn't know how to cook something when she got married.

My grandmother never allowed her stay in the kitchen.At the age of 25，my mother started cooking，it was very hard for her.Therefore，she had to take a few cooking class to prepare our meals.After having that experience，she has decided to teach me how to cook.

I remember I always help my mother when I was with her in the kitchen enjoy cooking.Nowadays，I am thank for that experience.

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I have never been to a cooking school.I learned cooking from my mother because she was really interesting in teaching me how to cook.The main reason for this was because my mother

interestedthatdidn't know how to cook something when she got married.

anythingMy grandmother never allowed her ∧ stay in the kitchen.At the age of 25，my mother

tostarted cooking， it was very hard for her.Therefore，she had to take a few cooking

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