2018年高考英语二轮复习第三部分写作训练篇专题5短文改错第2讲句法类错误练案 下载本文

with the word VOLUNTEER on the back.We helped with the police remind the passers-by to obey traffic rule.To our delighted,they all waited for the green light patient except one motor-regulations,for that many people praised us.About 4 hours later,they said good-bye to the police and left.Tired as we were,we all felt an honor to do our parts.

答案:

Last Sunday,I joined the voluntary group to help keep the traffic in good order

aat a big crossing near our school.At 8∶00 a.m.,we arrived there,wore red vests

wearingwith the word VOLUNTEER on the back.We helped with the police remind the passers-by to obey traffic rule.To our delighted,they all waited for the green light

rulesdelightpatient except one motor-biker.We also give out some hand-made brochures about

patientlygavetraffic regulations,for that many people praised us.About 4 hours later,they said

whichwegood-bye to the police and left.Tired as we were,we all felt ∧an honor to do our

itparts.

? 解析:在全文中是第一次出现,不能用特指,而应用泛指。故将the改为a。 ? 解析:现在分词作状语表主动含义,此处wear的主语是we,其间是主动关系。 ? 解析:帮助某人做某事,不存在help with sb.sth这一搭配。故将with去掉。 ? 解析:交通法规为固定用语,法规肯定不可能就一个。故将rule改为rules。 ? 解析:固定用语,意为令我们高兴的是……。故将delighted改为delight。 ? 解析:副词修饰形容词,此处是用副词patiently修饰形容词waited。 ? 解析:整篇文章所描述的事情发生在过去,所以动词应用过去时态。

? 解析:考查定语从句中介词+which的用法,此处for是与后面praised相照应的,praise sb.for sth.

? 解析:全篇的人称都是we我们,根据句意也应该是“我们和警察道别”。 10 解析:it在此处作形式宾语不可省略,真正的宾语是后面的不定式。 ○

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(2017·辽宁省沈阳市省示范协作校联考)

One day a rich man took his son on a trip to the country in order to show his son if the poor lived,so he could be thankful to his wealth.They spent a couple of days and nights on the farm of that would be considered a very poor family.On their return back,the father asked his son to explain what he had learnt.The boy,

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who had remained silent and deep in thought on the journey home,replying in a way that shocked his father.

The boy said he wanted to become farmer.He envied the farmers who had the beautiful night star to give them light while her family had only expensive lanterns.His wish was to have a farm where he could go swimming in an endless river instead of the garden pool in their home.Finally the boy finished by saying,“Before the trip I thought we were rich but today I have learnt who is true rich.”

With this,the boy got up and walked away,leaving his father sat on their comfortable sofa,totally speechless.

文章大意:一天,一位富人为了让儿子对他的财富充满“感激”,便带着儿子来到乡村去体验农民的生活,没想到结果却令富人“无语”,因为他的儿子想当农民。

答案:

One day a rich man took his son on a trip to the country in order to show his son ifthe poor lived,so he could be thankful to his wealth.They spent a couple

howforof days and nights on the farm of thatwould be considered a very poor family.On their

whatreturn back,the father asked his son to explain what he had learnt.The boy,who had remained silent and deep in thought on the journey home,replying in a way that

repliedshocked his father.

The boy said he wanted to become∧farmer.He envied the farmers who had the

abeautiful night starto give them light while her family had only expensive

starshislanterns.His wish was to have a farm where he could go swimming in an endless river instead of the garden pool in their home.Finally the boy finished by saying,“Before the trip I thought we were rich but today I have learnt who is true rich.”

trulyWith this,the boy got up and walked away,leaving his father sat on their

sittingcomfortable sofa,totally speechless.

? 解析:考查句意理解以及从属连词。本句的意思是:有一天,一位富人带着他的儿子去乡村旅行以便让他的儿子看看穷人是如何生活的;此处用来引导宾语从句,意为:如何;故用how。

? 解析:考查固定短语。be thankful to后面跟人,表示感谢某人;be thankful for后面跟事物,表示对某事物表示感谢;由于此处之后接的是wealth(财富);故用for。

? 解析:考查连接代词。此处用来引导宾语从句,由于该从句中缺少主语,故用连接

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代词what。

? 解析:考查return的含义。由于return“返回”相当于“go back/get back/come back”,即它本身就含有back的意思,其后不能再跟back;故去掉return之后的back。

? 解析:考查谓语动词。此处在句中作谓语,根据上文可知,此处讲述的是发生在过去某一天的事情,应使用一般过去时;故用replied。

? 解析:考查不定冠词。此处用来修饰单数名词farmer,表示泛指一位农民,故在farmer前加a。

? 解析:考查名词的单复数。此处指的是:许多美丽的夜星;由于star为可数名词;故用stars。

? 解析:考查人称代词。此处用来修饰名词family,指代的是男孩的家;故用his。 ? 解析:考查副词。此处用来修饰形容词rich,故用truly。

10 解析:考查固定搭配。leave ○sb doing 指让某人保持某动作或状态,留下某人…;此处指的是:男孩站起来走开了,留下了他的父亲坐在他们舒适的沙发上,完全说不出话来;故用sitting。

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(2017·山西省三区八校联考二模)导学号 47404081

Dear Chris,

I'm Li Ming,monitor of Class One,Senior One.I'm glad to hear that you will come to our school as exchange student next term.I feel it an honor of us to study with you.Now I have something to tell you about.Firstly,with the climate changing,you should prepared enough clothes.Then there are different kind of foods and snacks which will give you a chance to experiencing rich Chinese food culture.In addition,every student is friendly to foreign friends,that will make it easy for you to get along good with them.

Last but not least,we can do what we can to help you,and you must get prepared to meet trouble.During your stay here,I hope you can tell us more about American culture.Only by understanding and learn from each other can we spend these days together happily.

Yours, Li Ming.

文章大意:短文为李明写给交换生Chris的一封信,表示在他来我校交换期间会帮助他适应环境,以及互相学习。

答案:

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Dear Chris,

I'm Li Ming,monitor of Class One,Senior One.I'm glad to hear that you will come to our school as∧exchange student next term.I feel it an honor of us to study

anforwith you.Now I have something to tell you about.Firstly,with the climate changing,

you should prepared enough clothes.Then there are different kindof foods and preparekindssnacks which will give you a chance to experiencing rich Chinese food culture.In

experienceaddition,every student is friendly to foreign friends,that will make it easy for

whichyou to get along good with them.Last but not least,we can do what we can to help

wellyou,and you must get prepared to meet trouble.During your stay here,I hope you

butcan tell us more about American culture.Only by understanding and learnc from each

learningother can we spend these days together happily.

? 解析:考查冠词,student是可数名词,前需加冠词,exchange是以元音音素开头的单词,因此使用不定冠词an。

? 解析:考查固定搭配,表达“对于某人而言”使用介词for。

? 解析:考查固定搭配,此处是“告诉某人”,使用tell sb.,多了介词about。 ? 解析:考查动词,should是情态动词,后接动词原形,因此使用prepare。 ? 解析:考查名词的复数形式,kind“种类”是可数名词,表示“不同的种类”,different后接其复数形式。

? 解析:考查动词的用法,a chance to do sth.“做某事的机会”,to为动词不定式,后接动词原形,因此使用experience。

? 解析:考查定语从句引导词,考查非限制性定语从句的引导词,使用which。 ? 解析:考查固定搭配,表达“与某人相处融洽”使用动词短语get along well with sb.,因此good改为well。

? 解析:考查连词的用法,前后句子为转折的关系,and为并列的关系,因此改为but。 10 解析:○考查动名词形式,此处and连接两个并列的结构,by后接动名词,因此learn使用其动名词形式learning。

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(2017·四川省重庆市4月调研测试)导学号 47404082

A survey (调查)has recently carried out among the students in our school about whether they would like it if their parents gave birth to a second child.Opinions

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vary wide from one to another.

Most of the students supported the idea.They think that it would be amazing to have a brother and a sister to keep the company and share secrets with.Besides,we believe a second child would bring lots of funs to the family.

However,the rest of the students interviewing hold the opposite view.To start with,raising one child is already a difficult thing and the parents would have to work twice as hard if they had a second child.What's more,they argue whether they have been accustomed to enjoy the whole love from their parents.

答案:

A survey (调查)has recently∧ carried out among the students in our school

beenabout whether they would like it if their parents gave birth to a second child.Opinions vary wide from one to another.

widelyMost of the students supported the idea.They think that it would be amazing to

supporthave a brother and a sister to keep the company and share secrets with.Besides,

orwe believe a second child would bring lots of funs to the family. theyfunHowever,the rest of the students interviewing hold the opposite view.To start

interviewedwith,raising one child is already a difficult thing and the parents would have to work twice as hard if they had a second child.What's more,they argue whether they

thathave been accustomed to enjoy the whole love from their parents.

enjoying? 解析:A survey和carry out为被动关系,所以加been。 ? 解析:vary是动词,用副词修饰,所以用widely。

? 解析:这是陈述事实,用一般现在时,将supported改为support。 ? 解析:and表示并列,此处句意为选择而非并列,故用or。 ? 解析:keep company陪伴,陪同。

? 解析:由句意得此处主语为students,所以为they。 ? 解析:fun为不可数名词,无复数形式所以将funs改为fun。 ? 解析:student和interview为被动关系,所以用ed形式作定语。

? 解析:whether引导的是让步状语从句,而文中是陈述一个事实所以将whether删掉或者改为that。

10○ 解析:accustom固定搭配be accustomed to doing 所以将enjoy变为enjoying。

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