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the rails soon lulls you to sleep. 14. If the landscape is hidden from view, you can enjoy the extraordinary sight of unbroken cloud plains that stretch out for miles before you.

(二) 定语位置调整

1. 穿越平原的道路崎岖不平

The rough road across the plain [NCE3-Lesson39]

2. 那一向相待大家很好的可爱的老妇人

a dear old lady who had always been so kind to everybody [NCE3-Lesson24] 3. 即使是对艺术不感兴趣的人也不会不注意到在公共场所展出的现代艺术品。 Even people who take no interest in art cannot have failed to notice examples of modern sculpture on display in public places. [NCE3-Lesson18] 4. 人们所熟悉的是悬挂在天花板上的、造型奇特、随风飘荡的雕塑品。 Oddly shaped forms that are suspended from the ceiling and move in response to a gust of wind are quite familiar to everybody. [NCE3-Lesson18] 5. Mary与丈夫Dimitri逐在希腊南部一个叫Perachora的小村庄里。Mary最珍贵的(prize)

财产(possession)之一就是丈夫送给他的一只白色小羊羔 Mary and her husband Dimitri lived in the tiny village of Perachora in southern Greece. One of Mary's prize possessions was a little white lamb which her husband had given her. [NCE3-Lesson16]

6. 靠墙排列着许多细长的电线,而电线又连着金属球。 [NCE3-Lesson18]

Lined up against the wall, there were long thin wires attached to metal spheres. 7. 驱动轮子的链条断了一节

One of the links that drives the wheels had snapped .

(三) 状语位置调整

8. He says nothing about the poor selection of goods in the shops, or about those unfortunate

people who have to travel from the country to the city every day to get to work.

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9. Few things could be more impressive than the peace that descends on deserted city streets

at week-ends when the thousands that travel to work every day are tucked a way in their homes in the country.

10. However, he had at last been allowed to send a fax in which he informed the editor that he

had been arrested while counting the 1084 steps leading to the 15-foot wall which

surrounded the president's palace. [NCE3-Lesson5]

三. 巧藏谓语动词:S+V, [状语从句]/[分词]/[介词/adv] 轻轻的我走了, Quietly, I departed, 正如我轻轻的来; As I came likewise, 我轻轻的招手, Gently waving farewell, 作别西天的云彩。 To clouds around the setting sun. (一) 状语从句及定语 1.原理: ( ) S ( ) + V [ ]

2. 状语成分添加练习: 例:

? 状语从句的添加

1. Bush won his election, because he held a position on moral issue which

underscores the importance of the church‘s efforts to protect traditional values regarding the family and life. [原因]

2. Although the Iraq war has been a disaster, and Bush‘s elitist domestic

agenda is unpopular with voters, Bush won his election anyway. [让步]

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3. Bush won his election, so that he plunged U.S. into further threat of

terrorism. [结果]

4. As has been expected by the hundreds of Republican supporters who

gathered two blocks from the White House after a long night of poll watching and uncertainty, Bush won his election [situation]

? 练习1

The young challenge the tradition

? 方式[by ] ? 目的[in order to ] ? 让步[though ] ? 原因[for ] ? 条件[if ] ? 结果[so that ]

? 方式[by showing off their individual style in clothes or hair]

? 目的[in order to be unique in the crowd][gain more attention from others] ? 让步[though complained by their elders]

? 原因[for to be a problem gives them an identity]

? 条件[if their parents continually impose their own moral values on them] ? 结果[so that they will broaden the generation gap]

? To gain attention from others, young people challenge traditions intensely, by showing off their individual style in clothes or hair. Despite complaints from their parents, to be unique is invariably fascinating, for to be a problem gives them an identity. If their elders continually impose their own moral values on them, inevitably, their radical activities will broaden the generation gap. 61

? 练习2 white-collar-workers change jobs ? 练习3 profiteers sell fake consumers goods

2. 发展例证段 例:

Nowadays, the underlying trend of taking part-time job among college students become increasingly clear. 1 As the result of a recent survey among a number of key universities in Peking reveals, tight as time is, a growing number of college students take the temporary job in the neighborhood of the college in their leisure time, for they intent to win financial independence from their families. 2 One of my roommates,in spite of complaints about the busy life , has found the third part-time job, a tutor , for she intended to accumulate job-specific experience.

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A recent survey of the effects of noise revealed (surprisingly) that dogs barking incessantly in

the night rated the highest form of noise pollution on a scale ranging from 1 to 7. NCE3-Lesson 47

? 练习1 The young challenge the tradition

? 练习 2 white-collar-workers change jobs

? 练习 3 profiteers sell fake consumers goods

(二) 分词

1. 主语一致的分词做状语 ? 原理:

? 初级练习: 1) He looked at his watch, and he saw that it was one o'clock

Looking at his watch, he saw that it was one o'clock

2) He was armed with a torch, and the vicar went up into the clock tower to see what was going on.

Armed with a torch, the vicar went up into the clock tower to see what was going on.

3) Before he returned home at night, he took a shower and changed back into his suit.

Before returning home at night, he took a shower and changed back into his suit.

4) After he gazed at the display for several minutes, Mr Taylor went back into his shop.

After gazing at the display for several minutes, Mr Taylor went back into his shop.

5) The Titanic turned just in time, narrowly missing the immense wall of ice which rose

over 100 feet out of the water beside her.

The Titanic turned just in time, so that it narrow y missed the immense wall of ice which rose over 100 feet out of the water beside her.

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6) Though he owned a large car, he hardly ever used it, preferring always to go on foot.

Though he owned a large car, he hardly ever used it, for he preferred always to go on foot.

7) If them are cooked in wine, snails are a great luxury in various parts of the world.

Cooked in wine, snails are a great luxury in various parts of the world.

8) In order to avoid colliding with the taxi, I veered shapely

To avoid colliding with the taxi, I veered shapely.

9) One night, however, feeling cold and lonely, I went downstairs and sat in front of the

television pretending to read. 10) she tried to explain the situation, saying ― it‘s only me‖ ! 12) Bewildered, wondering what on earth he was supposed to have done this time, Harry got up and followed Uncle Vernon out of the kitchen and into the next room. 13) She stands at the door still. 14) Ashamed of having acted so rashly, Dimitri apologized to Aleko for having accused him. 15) Fearing to awake the baby, I slipped away softly. 16) Inevitably you arrive at your destination almost exhausted. 17) All men are created equal. 18) We enjoy staring at them entranced as they go about their business, unaware (we hope) of our presence.

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