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62. What do you want most in a friend — someone who is intelligent, or someone who has a sense of humor, or someone who is reliable? Which one of these characteristics is most important to you? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your choice.

15. Neighbors are the people who live near us. In your opinion, what are the qualities of a good neighbor? Use specific details and examples in your answer.

22. We all work or will work in our jobs with many different kinds of people. In your opinion, what are some important characteristics of a co-worker (someone you work closely with)? Use reasons and specific examples to explain why these characteristics are important.

18. What are some important qualities of a good supervisor (boss)? Use specific details and examples to explain why these qualities are important.

46. What are the important qualities of a good son or daughter? Have these qualities changed or remained the same over time in your culture? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

93. Many students have to live with roommates while going to school or university. What are some of the important qualities of a good roommate? Use specific reasons and examples to explain why these qualities are important.

179. What are some of the qualities of a good parent? Use specific details and examples to explain your answer.

166. People recognize a difference between children and adults. What events (experiences or ceremonies) make a person an adult? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your answer.

99. You have been told that dormitory rooms at your university must be shared by two students. Would you rather have the university assign a student to share a room with you, or would you rather choose your own roommate? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer.

2003年1月CET4/6作文题目 ——It Pays to Be Honest 1. 当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象 2. 诚实利人利已,做人应该诚实

第二节:描述人物的一生(时间顺序)

一.例文分析

William E. Hoy was born hearing in Houckstown, Ohio, on May 23, 1862. He became deaf before he was three years old. Later, he attended the Columbus \School for the Deaf from the age of ten to the age of eighteen. As a student, he learned to play baseball; from then on, he was always involved with baseball. 鲤鱼网——成功在于执着 30

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Following his high school graduation, Hoy started playing semi-professional baseball while he worked as a shoemaker. Eventually, Hoy began playing professional baseball in 1886 for Oshkosh (Wisconsin) of the Northwestern League. In 1888, he started as an outfielder with the old Washington Senators. Hoy was a small man, and he was fast. As a result, he was an outstanding base runner. In addition, he was very good at stealing bases during his career. In fact, during the 1888 major league season, he stole 82 bases. Moreover, he was the Senators leading hitter in 1888. Most importantly, he invented the arm signals, still used by umpires. Hoy's last ball game in 1903 was amazing. At that time he was playing for Los Angeles of the Pacific Coast Winter League. It was a memorable game. To illustrate, it was foggy; therefore, it was very hard to see the ball. In the ninth inning, while two men were out, Hoy managed to catch the ball in spite of the fog. Consequently, Los Angeles won the pennant for that year. When his last game was over, he retired from playing baseball. He knew that as he became older he was not playing as well as when he was younger. Nevertheless, he stayed very busy running a dairy farm near Cincinnati for 20 years and taking 4 and 10-miles walks several mornings. In October, 1961, after so much time away from baseball, Hoy appeared at Crowley Field in Cincinnati. He tossed the first ball of the World Series. Soon, after that, Hoy died on December 15, 1961 at the age of 99.*

? 练习:描述履历 0 12/15/1980

have a serious stammer

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the public school

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Capital Business and Finance University

21 a Stock Exchange

run a free course of NCE3 in some universities in Beijing NOS / as a teacher of NCE3

22 23 start up a writing course with an outstanding teacher

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参考答案: She was born in Beijing on December 15, 1980. She had a serious stammer before she was 6 years old. Consequently, she learned to play piano in a conservatory of music from the age of 6 to the age of 13. Later she attended to the public school. From then on, she was enrolled in the regular public education. Following her graduation from Capital Business and Finance University at age of 22, she found her first job in a Stock Exchange. Soon, after resign, she ran free courses of NCE3 in some universities in Beijing. In 2003, eventually, she worked for NOS as a teacher of NCE3. Up to now she has started up a successful writing course with an outstanding teacher in NOS. ? 描述特定人物的一生 One of the most colourful figures in boxing history was Daniel Mendoza who was born in 1764. The use of gloves was not introduced until 1860 when the Marquis of Queensberry drew up the first set of rules. Though he was technically a prize-fighter, Mendoza did much to change crude prize-fighting into a sport, for he brought science to the game. In his day, Mendoza enjoyed tremendous popularity. He was adored by rich and poor alike.

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事件部分 第一节 镜头转换法

(一)例文分析

(1)The expensive shops in a famous arcade near Piccadilly were just opening. (2)At this time of the morning, the arcade was almost empty. (3)Mr. Taylor, the owner of a jewellery shop was admiring a new window display. (4)Two of his assistants had been working busily since 8 o'clock and had only just finished. (5)Diamond necklaces and rings had been beautifully arranged on a background of black velvet. (6)After gazing at the display for several minutes, Mr. Taylor went back into his shop.

(7)The silence was suddenly broken when a large car, with its headlights on and its horn blaring, roared down the arcade. (8)It came to a stop outside the jeweler's. (9)One man stayed at the wheel while two others with black stockings over their faces jumped out and smashed the window of the shop with iron bars. While this was going on, Mr. Taylor was upstairs. He and his staff began throwing furniture out of the window. Chairs and tables went flying into the arcade. One of the thieves was struck by a heavy statue, but he was too busy helping himself to diamonds to notice any pain. The raid was all over in three minutes, for the men scrambled back into the car and it moved off at a fantastic speed. Just as it was leaving, Mr. Taylor rushed out and ran after it throwing ashtrays and vases, but it was impossible to stop the thieves. They had got away with thousands of pounds worth of diamonds. L6

远 (1) 摇 (2) 近 (3) (4) A 再近 (5)

动 (6) B 进入 (7) 近 (8) (9) B A (10)——

(二)应用到写作中:

Case 1:

远 The street appeared peaceful and harmonious with the piled-up fallen snow. 摇 At this time of the morning, the street was almost empty.

近 Standing alone at the corner of the street ,a young girl seemed waiting for someone A 再近 She held a fashionable purse in her hands

动 Seeming wrought-up, she paced up and down impatiently.

B 进入 Suddenly, a man dashed down the street towards her and grabbed her purse

violently.

近 The man wore a black stocking over his face.

B A The young girl ran after him crying ―help‖ and slipped on a piece of ice. The man soon disappeared into the end of the street with a trail of footprints

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behind him.

Case 2:

远 In the large classroom, a final-examination had been operating since 8:00 and had

almost finished.

摇 All of the examinees were engaged in struggling against the rest of the questions 近 Sitting in the middle of the room ,a boy looked anxious. A 再近 With his left hand put in his pocket

动 He got a small piece of paper from the pocket quickly and gently.

B 进入 At that moment, detecting his suspicious behavior, the teacher was approaching

him softly.

近 The teacher‘s face lit up.

B A Tthe teacher pounced on the small piece of paper full of words with great

pleasure. The student had to followed the teacher out of the classroom in deadly embarrassment and despair.

第二节 叙述同一时间内发生的几件事 Let us suppose that you are preparing a meal and keeping an eye on the baby at the same time. The telephone rings and this marks the prelude to an unforeseen series of catastrophes. While you are on the phone, the baby pulls the table-cloth off the table smashing half your best crockery and cutting himself in the process. You hang up hurriedly and attend to baby, crockery, etc. Meanwhile, the meal gets burnt. As if this were not enough to reduce you to tears, your husband arrives, unexpectedly bringing three guests to dinner. [NCE3-Lesson 33]

参考答案:

Let us suppose that you are watching a funny TV show in your bedroom when the phone rings in the hall. In the meantime, your baby bursts into tears in the baby-room. At the same time,

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