In today’s world, being able to master a foreign language will be helpful in our life. Here I’d like to share my learning methods. However, sometimes I get discouraged because I keep forgetting words I have just learned. I’d like to use the opportunity to seek for your advice. Thank you. 【解析】 【分析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一篇发言稿.。 【点睛】本篇范文结构清晰，内容完整，过渡衔接严谨自然，符合发言稿的要求，其中不乏亮点句型.。 The +比较级，the+比较级，结构的使用，I believe the more we read, the better our English will be. 【黑龙江省××市第一中学20xx届高三上学期第一次月考】假定你是李华.。 你将代表学校参加国际高中生环境保护论坛.。请你根据以下要点写一篇发言稿.。 1.环境保护的紧迫性 2.如何开展环境保护 3.呼吁大家积极参与 注意：1.词数 100 左右 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 参考词汇：论坛 forum _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 16 / 19 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thank you. 【解析】 【分析】 本文是一篇提纲类书面表达，要求考生把自己当成李华，将代表学校参加国际高中生环境保护论坛，请写一篇关于环境保护的短文.。全文以一般现在时和第三人称为主.。 第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的.。 【点睛】本篇范文结构完美，条理清晰.。范文时态和人称运用准确，涵盖了文字提示要求的所有要点，且有适当的个人发挥.。考生运用了多样式的句型结构，整篇文章富有变化，并不死板.。使用了较多的高级词汇，如cope with、take measures to do sth、pass laws、threaten our existence 等；尽量运用了丰富的句式，如让步状语从句wherever we go today, we can find rubbish carelessly disposed. 同时文章的一些串联成分，如furthermore等，这些串联词让各个要点更为紧密地结合在一起.。以上写作技巧的运用提升了文章的层次，显示了考生具有很强的驾驭语言的能力.。 【山西大学附属中学20xx届高三9月模块诊断】假设你是李华，是某中学国际部的一名学生.。你有幸做外教Chris的向导，带领他去当地一家中华老字号 17 / 19 (China Time-honored Brand)饭店品尝中国传统美食.。请你按如下提示给对方写一封邮件，告知这次行程安排.。 1．饭店情况； 2. 出发时间、地点 3. 交通方式 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯 参考词汇：specialty特色菜 Dear Chris， ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【答案】I’m so honored to serve as your guide to a local restaurant to taste traditional Chinese food. The restaurant enjoys a good reputation and has won a China Time-honored Brand title. The environment 18 / 19 is clean and elegant, not to mention its high quality dishes as well as top services. The traditional and unique soup dumplings are its specialty, which I do believe you will have a good feast on. By the way, it’s convenient to get there by bus, for it’s just within easy reach of the downtown. We’ll meet at the vus stop near our school this Sunday morning. Bus No. 9 will directly take us there. I hope you will have great fun. 【解析】 【分析】 这篇书面表达属于应用类作文，要求写一封信.。 【点睛】作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如：The traditional and unique soup dumplings are its specialty, which I do believe you will have a good feast on.定语从句的运用；I hope you will have great fun.宾语从句的运用.。本文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当.。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩.。 19 / 19