2019学年度人教版选修七Unit1Living well Period5如何写建议信学案

【写作任务】

假设你是李华，最近你在某西餐厅和一位残疾人朋友聚餐时发现餐厅未考虑残疾顾客的一些需求。请你根据提示用英语给餐厅负责人史密斯先生写一封建议信，希望餐厅改进服务质量。 1. 为盲人顾客读菜单； 2. 服务人员学会使用手势语； 3. 为坐轮椅的顾客设置专门的餐桌。

注意：1. 词数100左右（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mr Smith,

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【写作指导】 一、审题定调

本写作要求就改进餐厅服务质量方面向对方提建议，属于应用文。其目的是督促对方解决问题，故语言应正式、礼貌。时态以一般现在时为主。 二、谋篇布局

因为本写作任务开头和结尾已给出，所以我们只需要写出正文部分即可。正文部分可分为三部分：

第一部分：引出话题，说明写信目的（就残疾顾客的一些需求提建议）；

第二部分：提出建议（为盲人顾客读菜单、服务人员应会使用手势语以及为坐轮椅的顾客设置专门的餐桌）并说明理由； 第三部分：希望对方采纳。 三、组织语言

1. 引出话题，说明写信目的。

普通表达 高级表达 ◆I’m writing this letter with the intention of offering some advice / ◆I’m writing to give some advice / suggestions on ... ◆I’m writing to ask you to consider the following needs of the disabled. suggestions on ... ◆I’m writing to ask if you could think about some needs of disabled customers. ◆Considering the needs of disabled people, I would like to offer several suggestions. 2. 提出建议并说明理由。

普通表达 高级表达 ◆It is necessary to read the menu for blind customers, which shows your ◆It is necessary to read the menu for blind customers, as it shows your respect for them and makes them comfortable. ◆If the waiters can use gestures, deaf-mute customers or those with hearing problems would be very happy. ◆There could be some special tables for people in wheelchairs. respect for them and makes them feel at home. ◆It is vital for the waiters to use gestures when serving deaf-mute customers or those with hearing problems. This makes them feel as important as other customers. ◆Don’t forget to prepare some tables specially designed for those who have to sit in their wheelchairs. 3. 希望对方采纳。

普通表达 高级表达 ◆I would highly appreciate your ◆I hope you will find my advice / suggestions useful / helpful / practical. ◆I hope you will consider my advice / suggestions. consideration of my advice / suggestions. ◆I hope my suggestions will meet with your approval. ◆I hope you take my advice / suggestions into consideration. 【范文展示】

? 普通范文 ?

Dear Mr Smith,

I’m writing to give some suggestions on how to better serve disabled customers.

First, it is necessary to read the menu for blind customers, as it shows your respect for them and makes them comfortable. Second, if the waiters can use gestures, deaf-mute customers or those with hearing problems would be very happy. Third, there could be some special tables for people in wheelchairs. If you could pay attention to the needs of different customers, the customers will enjoy eating in your restaurant.

I hope you’ll find my suggestions useful.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

? 高级范文 ?

Dear Mr Smith,

I’m writing this letter with the intention of offering some suggestions on how to better serve disabled customers.

To begin with, it is necessary to read the menu for blind customers, which shows your respect for them and makes them feel at home. Also, it is vital for the waiters to use gestures when serving deaf-mute customers or those with hearing problems. This makes them feel as important as other customers. More importantly, don’t forget to prepare some tables specially designed for those who have to sit in their wheelchairs.