专题十七 短文改错

A组 2015～2013模拟基础题

Passage 1 (2015·曲阜4月)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共

有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Hello，everyone.It's nice to speak about that we can do for our school，and I

think small actions can make big difference.The first thing we can do is to make our campus more beautifully.Every one of them may plant a tree in the school or to organize a thorough cleaning on the campus.We can also form a good habit of putting rubbishes into trashcans.Never forget to turn off the lights and close the doors.We should not leave the tap water run or waste any materials in the laboratory class.In that case，I believe we'll turn our school in a better place to study and live in.

How I wish we can enjoy a better school life! Thank you for listening!

答案

Hello，everyone.It's nice to speak about we can do for our school，

and I think small actions can make big difference.The first thing we can do

is to make our campus morein the school or

.Every one of may plant a tree

organize a thorough cleaning on the campus.We can also form

a good habit of putting into trashcans.Never forget to turn off the

lights close the doors.We should not leave the tap water or waste

any materials in the laboratory class.In that case，I believe we'll turn our school

a better place to study and live in.

How I wish we enjoy a better school life!

Thank you for listening!

Passage 2 (2015·潍坊3月)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共

有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Jack，

Welcome to my school！Upon your arrival，there will be a party for you organizing

by my classmates.You may attend to English classes to feel a differently learning style.After that，you can go to your host family that you can experience the Chinese way of life.You can have meals together chatting about whatever interest you.

The host family will also show you off some famous scenic spots.You can see people

selling kites everywhere because our city was home to kites.There are varieties of kites to choose.So isn't that a good idea to buy some for your friends？Write to me unless you have any questions about the schedule.

Yours， Li Hua

答案

Dear Jack，

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organizedby my classmates.You may attend to English classes to feel a style.After that，you can go to your host family

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itunlessfriends？Write to me you have any questions about the schedule.

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The host family will also show you

Yours， Li Hua

Passage 3 (2015·淄博模拟)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共

有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I am very happy that you are interested in the protection of antelopes in China，

so I'd like to tell you everything about it.

In the past，some people kill antelopes for their free fur which can be made

into many beautiful things that are very expensive.As the result，the number of antelopes was decreasing day by day.Now things are begun to change.The government and the local people take powerful measures to protect antelopes so that they will

not die in the future.They had taken many effective measures，such as making strict laws to protecting antelopes，setting up several reserves for the antelopes，and so on.Of course，it's strong prohibited to buy or sell anything made of antelopes fur.

Nowadays，to our joy，there are much more and more antelopes in China.What's

more，their living conditions have greatly improved. 答案

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more，their living conditions have greatly improved. Passage 4 (2015·大连一模)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共

有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

In the summer holiday，we travelled to Qingdao and paid visit to my uncle

there.It's a long and bored journey.But the moment I arrived，I fall in love with the city.It's such beautiful a city that I can hardly find any word to describe it.The streets are cleaning and the sky is blue.If you walk along the coast，you can feel the wind to blowing on your face.The sea is vast and sometimes you can find a boat or a ship.You may also do some fishing as far as it is permitted.Moreover，I think the driver there drive too fast in the street.You can never be too careless when crossing the street. 答案

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there.It's a long and

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driverthere drive too fast in the street.You can never be too

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carefulPassage 5 (2015·山东省实验中学模拟)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共

有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。