注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

As we all know，everyone have a dream.I have dreamed of being a doctor since

I entered into the primary school.Nowadays with modern life go rapidly，many people suffer from different kind of diseases，both mentally and physically.As a result，doctors are in great need at home and abroad.My dream is to become successful doctor，helping to save people's lives.Although to be a good doctor was very difficult，I will do whatever I can to keep everyone health.To make my dream come true，I have told me over and over again that I'll concentrate more to studies.After all，only by working hardly can one succeed. 答案

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共

有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

We all have dreams，but not all these dreams can come true.People give up his

dreams for this or that reason.Those who dreams have come true have at least one thing in common，which is，they always hold fast to their dreams.

Marie Curie set us the good example.In 1898，Marie has found a new element.In

order to prove her discovery，she had to get it and showed it to the world.Then to get the new element become her dream and goal of her life.After four years' hard work，Marie and her husband last saw the dim blue light of the new element—radium.

Hold fast to your dreams，no matter how big and small they are.The path to your

dreams may not be smoothly and wide，even some sacrifices are needed，but hold on to the end. 答案

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共

有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

I'd like to give you some advices on how to learn Chinese well.

First，it was important to take a Chinese course，as you'll be able to learn

from the teacher and practising with your fellow students.Then，it also help to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in the Chinese whenever possible.It will make you familiar to Chinese characters and enlarge your vocabulary even before you notice it!

Besides，it is a good idea learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so

you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easy.You can also make more Chinese friends，they will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese.Try to speak Chinese as many as possible. 答案

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共

有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

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修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

It's pleasure for me to have a chance to make a short speech today.I have found

that some of my classmates study deeply into the night.What's more，they did not spare any time to exercise during the day.But they are less energetic than the others in class and can't always stay focusing on their lessons.Worse than that，some of them seldom have breakfast，with which is also a bad habit and will certainly do harm for their health.

Obvious，it's important for us to have enough sleep and a proper diet.We must

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假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共

有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线( )，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Hello，Peter.I'm very grateful for your concern about my coming exam.To tell

you truth，I have been busy prepare for the exam recently.Some classmates are feeling real stressed due to the exam，but I don't take them so seriously.I always learn in a relaxing mood and I'm making a great progress.Now that I had tried my best，it doesn't matter much to me what the result is.

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