whatone to buy because these books were all useful to me.At 10：
which?but00，we went to cinema.The film was called The Earthquake of Tangshan some
theanddidn't know
people were waiting outside the booking office.It took us about two hours to see
moving.Some of my friends even
movedtearveryburst into.That's a really wonderful film.It is worth seeing.
welltearsit.Having been\\ seen the film，everyone was deeply
What a happy day！I hope tomorrow I will be even happier.
Passage 10 (2013·成都名校质检)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共
有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Sir/Madam，
I'm one of your customer.The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your
shop.
Before I left，I do check it carefully and everything was all right.When I got
home，therefore，I found a fault with it.The problem is what the “Play” doesn't work at all.Probable it's not your fault and so is mine.Anyhow，I can't solve the problem in person.
You see，a walkman is of great useful for me to learn English and I cannot wait
for too long before this problem is solved.Hopefully you will deal with the walkman without delay，when you accept my letter.
Hoping to hear of you in the earliest possible time!
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
答案
Dear Sir/Madam，
I'm one of your
customer.The day before yesterday I bought a walkman in your
customersshop.
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howeverthat
Before I left，I work at all.
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usefor me to learn English and I cannot wait
fulusefor\\ too long before this problem is solved.Hopefully you will deal with the walkman without delay，when you
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accepmy letter.
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C组 一年创新导向
Passage 1
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共
有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear teachers and schoolmates，
It's great honor for me to be here today and share my experience of learning
English with you.I want to learn English well to take a better job，but I learn English in some difference ways.In class，I learn new words，useful expressions and grammar and take efforts to understand the texts under the help of our English teacher.After
the class，I do a lot of exercises prepare for the college entrance examination.You also read news and watch videos on the Internet and from other source.I have a lot of fun especial when learning English with cartoon movies.
Thanks for listening!
答案
Dear teachers and schoolmates，
It's
?agreat honor for me to be here today and share my experience of learning
English with you.I want to learn English well to take a better job，English in some
but I learn sodifferenceways.In class，I learn new words，useful expressions and
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sourceespecial.I have a lot of fun when learning English with cartoon
sourcesespeciallymovies.
Thanks for listening!
Passage 2
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共
有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It seemed that everyone is studying hard for the College Entrance
Examination.There are such many books to read.Nowadays，many a parent expect too much of their children.They hope their sons or daughters study hard in order to get
great colleges.It is the reason what parents are strict with their children.They don't know what they do with has become a heavy burden on their children.On my opinion，that isn't right.Instead，I think parents should create a proper learned environment for the children and allow me to play from time to time.Only in this way can the child do their best and succeed at last. 答案
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childdo their best and succeed at last.
children假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共
有10处错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线(\\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
The day before yesterday，my father invited to a restaurant by his good friends.At
the restaurant they didn't stop drinking until both of them were drunk.My father didn't realize the serious of driving a car after drinking.He decided to send his friends to their home.And then he drove home.While driven home，my father felt
uneasy.Before he realized that would happen，my father run into a house near the road.The police came and examined the amount of alcohol my father had drunk.It was over the normally standard.So the police fined my father.After that，my father regretted what he had done but made up his mind never to drink again before driving. 答案
The day before yesterday，my father
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friends.At the restaurant they didn't stop drinking until drunk.My father didn't realize the
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seriousnesshomedecided to send his friends to their.And then he drove home.While
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normalbutmy father.After that，my father regretted what he had done made up his mind
andfather
never to drink again before driving.