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专题强化练(十一) 书面表达

Passage 1(2019·山东潍坊高三模拟)

假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Terry要来中国体验传统民间艺术,请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括:

1.表示欢迎; 2.推荐一个体验项目; 3.说明理由。

注意:1.词数100左右;

2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

【写作思路】 这是一篇应用文写作。

第一步:根据提示可知,要求写一封邮件;假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Terry要来中国体验传统民间艺术,请你给他写一封邮件。内容包括:1.表示欢迎;2.推荐一个体验项目;3.说明理由。

第二步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:the Chinese traditional folk arts(中国传统民间艺术),express my warmest welcome(表达最热烈的欢迎),abundant(丰富的),paper-cutting(剪纸);delightful(令人愉快的)等。

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第三步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第四步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【参考范文】 Dear Terry,

Learning that you're coming to China to experience the Chinese traditional folk arts.I'm writing to sincerely express my warmest welcome.

There are abundant forms of folk arts throughout the whole country.Among them, paper-cutting is a good choice for you, whose themes usually involve everything in local people's daily life .

Paper-cutting represents the wisdom of Chinese people.It is not only beautiful but also very useful.People usually put them on doors or windows when they celebrate something delightful, especially for the Spring Festival.More and more people are interested in it.It enjoys increasingly high popularity, for which it is an ideal gift for friends.

I wish you a pleasant time here.

Yours, Li Hua

【点评】 范文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如Among them, paper-cutting is a good choice for you, whose themes usually involve everything in local people's daily life .运用了定语从句;People usually put them on doors or windows when they celebrate something delightful, especially for the Spring Festival.运用了时间状语从句。全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次

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分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。

Passage 2(2019·湖南岳阳高三模拟)

假定你是李华,最近你的美国笔友Jack发来邮件说这个暑假他想来中国旅游。请用英语给他回一封邮件,主要内容如下:

1.表示欢迎;

2.介绍长城、岳阳楼或者杭州西湖(任选一个景点)。 注意:1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear Jack,

Yours, Li Hua

【写作思路】 根据提示可知,本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求写一封关于介绍一个旅游景点的书信,时态应为一般现在时。

第一步:确定关键要点:1.暑假他想来中国旅游;2.表示欢迎;3.介绍长城。

第二步:根据关键要点,确定关键词,如:summer holiday(暑假),the Great Wall(长城),the most important tourist spots(最重要的旅游景点)等。

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第三步:根据提示及关键词进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题以及句子结构完整。

第四步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,使之自然流畅,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面。

【参考范文】 Dear Jack,

I'm very glad to hear that you are coming to China this summer holiday.You will be warmly welcomed.There are lots of famous places of interest in China for you to visit, for example, the Great Wall, Yueyang Tower, the West Lake and so on.

Take the Great Wall for example.It is known as one of the seven great wonders of the world, which is located in North China, over 6, 000 kilometers in length and 25 feet high on average.It can date back to 2,700 years ago built with earth, brick and stone to keep out invaders in ancient China.However, it is now regarded as one of the most important tourist spots in our country or even in the world.It is really worth your visit.

I'm looking forward to your coming. Best wishes to you!

Yours, Li__Hua 【点评】 本篇范文结构清晰,内容完整,过渡衔接严谨自然,符合书信的要求,其中不乏亮点句型。如:非限制性定语从句的使用:It is known as one of the seven great wonders of the world, which is located in North China, over 6, 000 kilometers in length and 25 feet high on average.非谓语动词的使用:It can date back to 2,700 years ago built with earth, brick and stone to keep out invaders in ancient

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China.

Passage 3(2019·河南新乡高三质量检测)

假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom对中国谚语(Chinese proverbs)很感兴趣。他来信请教有关知识。请给他回信,内容包括:

1.中国谚语的由来(人们的智慧和经验,简短有意义,口口相传); 2.学习中国谚语的方法。 注意:

1.词数100左右;

2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

【写作思路】 这是一篇书信类作文。写作提要假定你是李华,你的英国朋友Tom对中国谚语(Chinese proverbs)很感兴趣。他来信请教有关知识。请给他回信,内容包括:1.中国谚语的由来(人们的智慧和经验,简短有意义,口口相传);2.学习中国谚语的方法。我们所要做的就是用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来。本作文中给出的要点比较简略,故需要自由发挥的地方较多。但注意不要偏离文章中心。写作时注意准确运用时态,使上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。

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