given 5-star reviews．It is located at 5120 Rodeo Rd，Los Angeles．Could you come at 6 p.m. on Friday?

By the way, I will present you with a go set then．I really appreciate that you have done to help me with my English during the past two years．But you，I would not have made such a great progress in English．

Looking forward to you early reply!

Yours, Li Hua

【答案】 1. for 改为 to

2.surprising 改为 surprised 3. there 改为 here 4.happened 改为 happens 5.naming 改为 named 6.where 改为 which 7.that 改为 what

8.But 改为 But for 或者 Without 9.a 去掉 10.you 改为 your

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考点：考查短文改错 【名师点睛】

在短文改错中常出现的错误主要有以下几类： 1. 名词单复数用错，可数与不可数名词的混用。

2. 动词：时态和语态，常出现在总体时态为过去或现在时，中间杂有不适的另一时态的现象；或是及物动词后无宾语，或是不及物动词后加了宾语；需要接ing形式的接了to，或相反等。比如第4句考查时态。根据前文的I am there visiting my uncle可知时态为一般现在时，故happened 改为 happens。

3. 形容词副词：常出现需形容词的地方用了副词或相反；关系副词where， when， why等的缺失或错用。 4. 介词：主要是介词的多余或缺失，错用。比如第一句 考查介词。Invite sb to do sth邀请某人做某事，故for 改为 to。

5. 主谓一致性：第三人称单数漏掉s，或主语为复数，谓语动词用了单数；再就是就近原则对主语的影响。 6. 冠词：定冠词the的多余或缺失，如季节，月份，星期，球类及三餐活动，称呼头衔前等不能加the的地方加了the。比如第9句，考查冠词。 此处修饰great progress，表示进步。故a 去掉。 7. 数词：主要是序数词与基数词的混用和错用。

8. 连词：不合句中的逻辑关系。如需转折连词（如but）的时候用了承接连词（so），或相反等等。比如第

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8题：考查固定短语。But for 或 Without表示要不是你，故But 改为 But for 或者 Without。

9. 代词：主要是代词的格与数的错用。如男性用了女性代词，单数用了复数代词或相反；应当用形容词性的物主代词用了宾格，主格或相反，关系代词的错用或缺失。比如第10题：考查代词。此处修饰reply，应该用形容词性物主代词。故you 改为 your。

10. 常用固定短语或固定用法及句型用错。比如第8题：考查固定短语。But for 或 Without表示要不是你，故But 改为 But for 或者 Without。 第二节 书面表达 (满分25分)

假如你是某校学生李华，你和父母寒假去澳大利亚旅游，报名参加了当地旅行社Sky Travel Agency的一日团。一日团结束后，导游Mike请你写下对当日旅游服务的意见。要点如下： · 对导游的服务表示感谢

· 一日游的景点安排合理，玩得开心 · 会将旅行社推荐给自己的好友

注意：(1) 词数l00左右； (2) 在答题卡上作答； (3) 开头和结尾均已给出 (不计入总词数)。 To whom it may concern，

I have been thoroughly impressed with the service I have received．____________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________

Yours, Li Hua

【答案】

To whom it may concern，

I have been thoroughly impressed with the service I have received．Firstly, I would like to express my sincere thanks to Mike, the tour guide from Sky Travel Agency，for his warm service along the journey. Mike is good at explaining things on the timetable, as well as some related information about the places that we went to. Secondly，the schedule for our one-day journey was thoughtfully arranged so that both my parents and I had a really wonderful time. We arrived at the destinations and saw the sights at a reasonable amount of time with great comfort. Besides, some annoying parts like forced-shopping was avoided, which has saved much of our time. Last but not least, I would like to widely recommend Sky Travel Agency to my friends. It is with your great efforts that my parents and I can enjoy such a great day! Thanks again!

Yours， Li Hua

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【亮点说明】Secondly，the schedule for our one-day journey was thoughtfully arranged so that both my parents and I had a really wonderful time. 运用so that从句，使文章更加有档次；Besides, some annoying parts like forced-shopping was avoided, which has saved much of our time. 运用定语从句；Firstly, I would like to express my sincere thanks to Mike, the tour guide from Sky Travel Agency，for his warm service along the journey. 此句式为文章增色，显得文章很有档次。 考点：考查书信类作文

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