2018届二轮复习 短文改错专题训练10篇之三十

[一]

Mr. and Mrs. Zhang all work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about a hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are interesting in planting vegetables in their garden, that is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up earlier and water the vegetables together. They have also bought for some gardening tools. Beside, they often get some useful informations from the Internet. When summer came, they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables! 答案 Mr. and Mrs. Zhang work in our school. They live far from the school, and it takes them about hour and a half to go to work every day. In their spare time, they are in planting vegetables in their garden, is on the rooftop of their house. They often get up and water the vegetables together. They have also bought

for

some gardening tools., they often get some useful from the Internet. When summer ,they will invite their students pick the fresh vegetables! [二]

It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity; others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework, but I was shy. I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, “The classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks, and mistake as well.”Immediate, I raised my hand. 答案 It was Monday morning, and the writing class had just .Everyone was silent, wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud. Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity; others were nervous and anxious. I had done myself homework, but I was shy. I was afraid

that

to speak in front of a larger group of people. At that moment, I remembered that my father once said, “The classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks, and mistake as well.”Immediate, I raised my hand. [三]

We had an English story-telling competition day before yesterday. It is required that all the entries be original and interesting, and be presenting in English within five

minutes. All my classmates took an actively part in the activity. Two foreign English teachers were invited to act like judges. In the end, Li Ping had got the first place. All the participants said the activity benefited us a lot in many ways. Not only did it improved their spoken English, and it also brought them much fun. We all hope that so kinds of activities can be held again. 答案 We had an English story-telling competition day before yesterday. It required that all the entries be original and interesting, and be in English within five minutes. All my classmates took an part in the activity. Two foreign English teachers were invited to act judges. In the end, Li Ping

had

got the first place. All the participants said the activity benefited a lot in many ways. Not only did it their spoken English, it also brought them much fun. We all hope that kinds of activities can be held again. [四]

Dear Bill,

I’m glad to receive your letter. Thank you for your caring for the weather or my health. Now I’d like to tell you anything about the smog.

Since last winter, the smog has been occurred a lot of times. It has done great harm to our daily life—a great number people got sick, many traffic accidents happened and quite lots of flights had to be put up. Luckily, people have realized the serious harm causing by the smog and the importance of protecting the environment. People all over the country are taking measure to reduce the smog. As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot, and I wouldn’t throw the waste anywhere. Beside, I will tell people around to try their best to protect the environment. Would you like to tell me some other good ideas?

Looking forward to receive your reply.

Yours, Li Hua

Dear Bill,

I’m glad to receive your letter. Thank you for your caring for the weather my health. Now I’d like to tell you about the smog.

Since last winter, the smog has

been

occurred a lot of times. It has done great harm to our daily life—a great number people got sick, many traffic accidents happened and quite lots of flights had to be put .Luckily, people have realized the serious harm by the smog and the importance of protecting the environment. People all over the country are taking to reduce the smog. As for me, I will go to school by bike or on foot, and I throw the waste anywhere., I will tell people around to try their best to protect the environment. Would

you like to tell me some other good ideas?

Looking forward to your reply.

Yours, Li Hua

[五]

How is everything going? I would like to express my thanks with your kindness during my stay in London last week. Know that you take a great fancy to Chinese culture, especial the Spring Festival, I would love to introduce it to you. The Spring Festival, one of the most important festival in China, falls on January 1 in the lunar calendar. It has a long history, that was originally celebrated to drive away a monster “Nian”.Different that in the past, it is now given many new meanings. On the New Year’s Eve, each family have its members gather together. They tell each other their lives in the past year, exchange gifts and to eat delicious meals in the warm of the family. I hope you will come here and experienced this wonderful festival. 答案 How is everything going? I would like to express my thanks your kindness during my stay in London last week. that you take a great fancy to Chinese culture, the Spring Festival, I would love to introduce it to you. The Spring Festival, one of the most important in China, falls on January 1 in the lunar calendar. It has a long history, was originally celebrated to drive away a monster “Nian”.Different that in the past, it is now given many new meanings. On the New Year’s Eve, each family its members gather together. They tell each other their lives in the past year, exchange gifts and

to eat delicious meals in the of the family. I hope you will come here and this wonderful festival.

【六】

My father is the man I respect most. Strict as he may be, however he never fails to show her care and consideration. Once I broke a neighbor window. Seeing nobody around, I ran away immediately. When Dad came home, he noticed my uneasiness and asked me what has happened. I could only tell him a truth. Instead of scold, he praised my honesty and then encouraged me to apologize our neighbor. I learned from this incident that not only does Dad take care of my health, and he also teaches me what to be a good citizen. How luckily I am to have such a good father!

答案：第二句：去掉however; her→his 第三句：neighbor→neighbor’s 第五句：has→had 第六句：a→the