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第二节 读后续写(满分25分)

67.阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。

Parents everywhere praise their kids. Jenn Berman, author of The A to Z Guide to Raising Happy and Confident Kids, says, \strict.\be just the opposite. Too much praise can backfire and, when given in a way that's insincere, make kids afraid to try new things or take a risk for fear of not being able to stay on top where their parents' praise has put them.

Still, don't go too far in the other direction. Not giving enough praise can be just as damaging gas giving too much. Kids will feel like they're not good enough or that you don't care and, as a result, may see no point in trying hard for their accomplishments.

So what is the right amount of praise? Experts say that the quality of praise is more important than the quantity. If praise is sincere and focused on the effort not the outcome, you can give it as often as your child does something that deserves a verbal reward.\hard to achieve a goal, \What Really Matters. \

Your son may not be the best basketball player on his team. But if he's out there every day and playing hard, you should praise his effort regardless of whether his team wins or loses. Praising the effort and not the outcome can also mean recognizing your child when she has worked hard to clean the yard, cook dinner, or finish a book report. But whatever it is, praise should be given on a case-by-case basis and be proportionate(相称的)to the amount of effort your child has put into it.

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【思路点拨】作为概要写作，要注意每段归纳主题句和关键词，然后通过词汇替换，句式转变等多种方式，改写要点，要注意一定要用自己的语言，不可以完全照搬照抄。然后，添加衔接词，使得逻辑上要点之间能够通顺、流畅。最后要注意单词拼写不要出现错误，大小写和标点符号也是关键，还要注意字数的控制，不要少于40字或多于80字。

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Nowadays, parents tend to offer considerate praise to their children, hoping to boost their confidence, but it may produce the opposite effect.（要点1） However, no praise from parents also does harm to their self-confidence. （要点2） Therefore, experts claim that sincere praise should be given for the process not for the result. Meanwhile, kids do deserve praise if they strive to do their duty. （要点3） Anyway, the amount of praise you have depends on how hard they work. （要点4） 5.【2019·北京】书面表达(共两节，35分) 第一节 (15分)

51.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim打算暑假期间来北京、天津和上海旅游，发来邮件询问相关信息。请你给他回复邮件，内容包括: 1.交通出行； 2.必备衣物。 注意:

1.词数不少于50；

2.开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim，

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Yours, Li Hua

【思路点拨】考生成文时应注意：1. 要体现交际感，重视对来信内容的回答。2. 思路清晰，要点要齐全：首段表示欢迎，第二段介绍城市的交通出行和必备衣物等要点，结尾表达期待。3. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅。 【参考范文】 Dear Jim，

How is everything going? I’m so happy to hear that you will come in China for travel in summer vacation. First I would like to express my warmest welcome to you and I am sure you will have the most unforgettable journey during in China.

Now I’ll offer you some travel tips, which, I hope, can solve your problems. As the popular tourist cities, Beijing, Tianjin and Shanghai have extremely convenient transportation. The subway systems can take you everywhere in the city. If you want a deep experience in the cities, shared bikes would be the best choice. As for city-to-city tour, the high-speed trains are highly recommended because they have been the most convenient way in recent years. As for clothes preparation, hats, sun glasses and sun-proof clothing would be necessary, considering you will come to China during the summer. Also, pack a pair of comfortable shoes in case of the city walk. I hope these suggestions above will be of some help toy you.

I am looking forward to hearing from you. If you have further questions, please feel free to let me know. Yours， Li Hua 第二节(20分)

52.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你们班上周组织了一次以“劳动最光荣”为主题社会实践活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，写一篇英文周记，记述整个过程。 注意:词数不少于60。 提示词:西瓜watermelon

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【思路点拨】该情景作文的主题是“劳动最光荣”，四幅图的要点：老师在黑板上写下活动主题“劳动最光荣”；“打包行李出发去乡下”；“在乡下摘西瓜”；“和家长吃饭，回忆一天的劳动旅程”。在行文时应该注意思路清晰，条理清楚，文章最后应该升华主题。

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Last week, we held the class meeting and our teacher informed us of the news that an activity themed \of Labor\the desire to be involved in it. We regarded it as a wonderful opportunity to experience the real life. Then I returned home to prepare the luggage. I packed my necessities into it which included some clothes, towels and the water glass. I couldn’t wait to experience the activity. We came to the watermelon patch and were divided into several groups and got down to work. Some students were responsible for picking the watermelons; some students put the watermelons into the baskets while others carried the baskets filled with watermelons to the specified place. Tired as we were, we were in high spirits. After getting the task finished, I returned home and recalled the whole day, sharing my excitement with my parents. An overwhelming sense of pride came over me.

It was through this experience that I realized that labor is glorious. Never could it fade from my mind and I expected another activity like this. 6.【2019·天津】书面表达（满分25分）

61.假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris 将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座、现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件:

（1）你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）； （2）选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容； （3）希望从中有何收获。 注意：

（1）词数不少于100：

（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； （3）开头和结尾已给出、不计入总词数。 Dear Chris，

I'm Li Jim，a student at Chenguang High School.

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Thank you for your time.

Yours， Li Jin

【思路点拨】

随着时代的发展，电子邮件越来越受广大中学生的欢迎，所以写电子邮件是中学生经常做的事，这种形式的写作贴近学生生活，使他们感到熟悉。考生成文时应注意：1. 要点要齐全：(1)讲座的话题；(2)选该话题的原因；(3)该话题你感兴趣的内容；(4) 希望从中有所收获2. 时态：以一般现在时为主；3. 人称：第一人称为主，辅以第二人称；4. 注意恰当使用一些连词，使文章自然、流畅；5. 适当使用一些高级句型和词汇以提高作文档次。 【参考范文】 One possible version Dear Chris,

I’m Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. Learning that you will give us a presentation about art in western countries during the coming summer holidays, we’re more than delighted.

Most of us prefer western painting. Several reasons may account for my preference. For one thing, I’m interested to learn how western art has developed into what it is today through history, and the most influential artists in each period of its development. For another, I’m crazy to learn how to appreciate western paintings. Last but not least, It would be better if you can tell us some tricks about how to paint. I hope your presentation will contribute to our better understanding of western paintings. Thank you for your time.

Yours, Li Jin

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81.请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

Li Jiang:Have you heard this？A group of exchange students from the UK are visiting our school next month.