中文：媒体通过夸大受害者的伤痛去吸引观众，而忽视对这些观众的有害结果，比 如将他们在公众面前曝光。

主+及物动词+宾语+宾语补足语

翻译 23：基因工程让人们能培养新品种农作物

错误的句子：Genetic engineering allows people to nurture new species crops.

错误 1 species crops 语序有问题

正确的句子：Genetic engineering allows people to nurture crop varieties.

句子结构：主语+ 及物动词+ 宾语（people）+宾语补足语（to nurture…） 拓展的句子：

Genetic engineering allows people to nurture crop varieties that are resistant to drought， thereby improving land productivity.

中文：基因工程使人们能培育出抗旱的农作物品种，因此可以提高土地利用率。

翻译 24：经常运动使得人们保持健康的心态

错误的句子：Doing exercises regularly helps people maintain a healthy state of mind.

错误 1 Doing exercises 一般是不可数

正确的句子：Doing exercise regularly helps people maintain a healthy state of mind.

句子结构：主语+ 及物动词+ 宾语（people）+宾语补足语（to maintain…省略了 to） 还可以用并列句扩充

Doing exercise regularly helps people maintain a healthy state of mind and makes it easier for them to cope with stress.

中文：经常做运动帮助人们保持一个健康的心态，是他们更容易应对压力。

翻译 25：不健康的生活方式让人们处于生病的危险之中。 错误的句子： Unhealthy lifestyle is likely to make people at risk of illness.

错误 1： make somebody do something 或者是 make somebody +形容词是更常见的用法。

错误 2：lifestyle 可数名词，要加冠词，或者复数

正确的句子：An unhealthy lifestyle may put people at risk of illness. 句子结构：主语（An unhealthy lifestyle）+及物动词（put）+宾语（people）+宾语补足 语 （at risk of illness）

翻译 26：奖学金可以鼓励更多的学生去学习研究生课程。 错误的句子： Scholarship could be regarded as something to inspire more students to take postgraduate curriculum. 错误 1 scholarship 可数名词，应该有复数或者冠词 错误 2 regarded as something 太过罗嗦

错误 3 curriculum 不是 course 的替换词，curriculum 的意思是课程大纲

正确的句子：Government grants could encourage more students to take postgraduate courses.

句子结构：主语 (government grants)+及物动词(encourage)+宾语(students)+宾语补足语(to take postgraduate courses)

翻译 27：社区改造为罪犯提供了获得职业技能的机会

错误的句子：Replacing the long sentence by working for the locals provides offenders with transferable skills. 错误 1 主语很别扭， 两个东西没有替换性

正确的句子：Community service provides offenders with opportunities to acquire transferable skills.

句子结构：主语+ 及物动词+ 宾语（offenders）+宾语补足语（with opportunities to…） 还可以用并列句扩充

Community service provides offenders with opportunities to acquire transferable skills and gives them a flying start when they are released. 中文：社区服务给犯人提供获得实用技能的机会，给他们好的起点当他们被释放后。

翻译 28：法律应该将醉驾变成刑事犯罪。

错误的句子 ：the government should introduce a law which is drunk driving a criminal offence.

错误 定语从句还原是“a law is drunk driving”显然不对。 中国学生有个误区，就是一定 要写个从句，才能加分。

正确的句子：Legislation should make drink driving a criminal offence. 句子结构：主语（legislation） +及物动词(make)+宾语(drink driving)+宾语补足语(a criminal offence)

翻译 29：乡村地区给人们提供机会去远离现代生活的压力和噪音。 错误的句子 ：rural area provides people with opportunity to escape pressure and noises of modern life.

错误 1：rural area 可数名词，没有冠词，或者复数。 错误 2：opportunity 在这里用复数比较好。

正确的句子：Rural areas provide people with opportunities to escape pressure and noises of modern life.