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On January 1st, the government began to levy a tax on (征税) the companies and factories which cause pollution. People in Chongqing pay close attention to it.
With the development of industrialization, more and more factories are built. While the factories especially iron and steel factories are bad for environment. To protect our environment, the government began to levy a tax on the companies and factories.
After that, there will be less and less pollution and the city will become more and more beautiful.
For us students, we can do something to the environment. First of all, as we all know, some places are lack of fresh water, so we’d better save water. What’s more, we can plant trees as much as possible. Last but not least, we can share our ideas with people to let them join us. Only by doing these simple things can we protect our environment well. 【解析】
1.题干解读。本文属于话题作文，主要讲述我国向企业征收环保税的原因以及这件事情以后重庆的变化。并谈一下我们个人可以为环保做什么贡献。注意时态的使用，且切记不要遗漏要点，并灵活运用所学单词、短语以及句型，使文章更加生动。
2.例文点评：这是一篇优秀的作文，很好的完成了试题规定的任务，语言表达符合英语习惯，准确运用时态、主谓一致，特别使用一些亮点词句，增强逻辑关系，增加上下文意思连贯，用词准确，句子通顺，行文连贯。
3.高分亮点：
单词短语：With the development of industrialization, 比较级and比较级, especially, be bad for, to do表示目的, begin to, first of all, as we all know, be lack of, what’s more, as much as possible, last but not least, share sth with sb等。
高分句型：Only by doing these simple things can we protect our environment well中“only+状语”放句首，用半倒装。
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【点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达，例如With the development of industrialization, 比较级and比较级, especially, be bad for, to do表示目的, begin to, first of all, as we all know, be lack of, what’s more, as much as possible, last but not least, share sth with sb等；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅，如first of all，what’s more，last but not least等；最后，要仔细检查有无单词拼写错误、标点符号误用等，还要检查语法结构是否合理，有无重复、啰嗦的语言，大小写是否正确，词数是否符合要求等。
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学校的英语报就“争做校园环保小卫士”话题征文，请你投稿。谈谈生活中你的具体做法、环境保护的重大意义以及你的环保倡议。 要求：1. 词数80—100词；
2. 短文中不得提及真实的人名和校名等信息； 3. 开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
提示词语： collect bottles turn off duty make a real difference
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Good environment is important for everyone. To help with it, I pick up the litter when I see it on the floor. Besides, I always collect bottles and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.
As students, I think it’s our duty to protect the environment of our school. And even the simplest activities can make a real difference to the environment. So I suggest we should reuse books as long as possible. And it’s also a good idea to take part in recycling programs.
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I hope everyone will care about the environment. I believe we can make our school more and more beautiful. 【解析】
试题分析：作文要围绕要点展开写作：具体做法，感受，建议。要符合题目要求，观点正确，要点齐全。句式多样，词汇丰富。语言准确，语意连贯，表达清楚，具有逻辑性.注意提示语 collect bottles turn off duty make a real difference的运用。注意作文的升华，提出环保的意义。 【亮点说明】
To help with it, I pick up the litter when I see it on the floor. Besides,I always collect bottles and I never forget to turn off the lights when I leave the classroom.1.具体做法最好写上三点，三点之间要有过渡。过渡不要频繁使用 first，second，third。这篇文章处理的很好，to help with it, Besides, and。2. 注意从句的运用，比如时间状语从句，定语从句等。
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今年几个世界大国首脑都参加了八国峰会，这次的主题是世界经济、能源问题和气候变化。经济发展离不开环境话题，能源使用必然污染环境，而气候变化就是经济发展和环境问题矛盾的产物。请写一篇保护水的文章。
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It’s our duty to save water
As we know , water is very important to man, we can’t live without water. The amount of water which is suitable to drink is less and less. But some people don’t care about it .They waste a lot of water in their daily life. Even worse, they pour dirty water in to rivers. They throw rubbish into rivers , too. Many rivers and lakes are seriously polluted. Something must be done to stop the pollution. Only in this way can we live happily. If we don’t save water, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop of us.
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人与环境是和谐相处的，我们生存在地球上，人是自然之子，而不能仅把人看作自然的征服者，大家都知道，人类只有一个地球，地球上的山山水水、动物。植物是人类的细胞，如果我们把它损坏了，破坏了大自然的组织，等于消灭人类。因此，环境要与社会公德联系起来，与实践行为作为人格教育的一项重要内容来抓。每个人都要履行保护环境的责任和义务，请写一篇不少于80字的环保文章。
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Harmony with the environment is that we live in on Earth, who is a natural son, and not only to natural persons as the conqueror, as we all know, there is only one earth and the mountains on Earth, the animals. Plant human cells, if it damaged, destroyed nature organizations, to the eradication of mankind. Therefore, the environment must be linked with social ethics, character education and practice acts as an important element of it. Everyone must fulfil its responsibilities and obligations to protect the environment.
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