四级常考作文类型和范文

四级作文常考类型

1. 图画类作文:全英文提示+图片 一、四级作文常考类型4大类: 2. 谚语类作文:全英文提示+谚语 3. 图表类作文:英文(或中文)提示+图表 4. 提纲类作文:2-3个中文提示 二、4大类型作文框架+范文+通用句型 1. 图画类:全英文提示+图片 1)例题

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of learning basic skills. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

1. 读懂题头要求 2) 写作步骤 2. 分析图片 3. 构建作文框架 4. 开始写作 3)写作框架:三段式

第一段:图画描述(细节描写) (背诵图片描述通用句型)

这是题目中明确要求的(a brief description of the picture),所以你不描绘图画,或者是图画信息不全,扣分。描述的时候,你要把学生提问的那句话写出来,把老师教课的动作写出来,以及老师听到学生挑衅性的提问之后的表情,也要写出来。

第二步:分析原因或利弊等(提炼图画的内涵) (一、二、三列举原因)

孩子对老师教的知识,确切地说,是对老师教授的基本知识、非实用性知识的一种质疑。所以,你可以在第二段分析一下原因:为什么学生,也就是现代人的代言,对这种不能马上用于工作的、带来回报的、理论性的基础指示和技能不懈?

第三步:重申主题的重要性和做法(总结和启发) (呼吁并列举一至两点重要性)

分析完了原因之后,你要回到主题,那就是我们不能忽视这些基本技能,要唤起大家对“基本技能的重要性”的认识。所以,这一段,你可以正面阐述为什么basic skills 如此的重要,就可以了。

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4) 范文

第一段 描述图片 As is vividly depicted in the cartoon given above, we can observe that there are many students sitting in a classroom. ①When listening to the teacher, one of the students just interrupts the teacher and says “No offense, but by the time we’re in the job market, won’t that stuff be outdated?” ②Having heard this question, the teacher stops demonstrating the Multiplication Table and seems to be quite shocked and embarrassed。 第二段 分析原因、利弊或重要性 The cartoon informs us of the phenomenon that quite a few students undervalue the importance of learning basic skills these days. ①Firstly, confronted with fiercer competition from society and employment market, students are more focused on practical skills which can be applied in daily work immediately. ②Moreover, they also fears that the basic knowledge and skills they learn today will be outdated by the time they are in the job market。 段 第三段 重申主题的主要性、做法 However, no one can disclaim the importance of learning basic skills. ① On one hand, it enables us to lay a strong foundation for further learning and exploration. ②In other words, those who have mastered basic skills well are more likely to acquire other skills and knowledge with ease. ③ On the other hand, basic skills are equivalent to the first step of success, as an ancient Chinese saying goes, “ A road of thousand miles towards the success begins with the first step。” 第一段 描述现象 注意:图画类作文常用的开头句型 ① 图片细节一:学生在做什么(直接引用图片中的话)。 ② 图片细节二:老师的反应(动作、态度) 第二段 分析原因 主题句:注意套用句型,引出学生的态度:学习基本技能不重要。 ① 原因一:竞争激烈。 ② 原因二:过时 第三段 总结评述 主题句:重申主题的重要性 ① 重要性一:打下坚实基础 ② 进一步解释前一句: ③ 重要性二:成功的第一步 谚语:千里之行始于足下 需要背诵的通用句型: 一、 开头段:描述图画

1. As is vividly depicted in the cartoon given above, we can observe that… 2. The scene drawn in the above picture is that… 3. The picture symbolically illustrates that… 二、 中间段:分析图片产生的原因

1. The cartoon informs us of the phenomenon that …

2. Looking at the picture, we can’t help thinking of the more and more serious phenomenon of… 3. It is obvious that the drawer of this picture wants to draw our attention towards…

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2. 谚语类:全英文提示+评论谚语 1)例题

Directions: You're allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, \the easiest thing in the world. I've done it hundreds of time.“ You'd write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

2)写作框架:三段式

第一段:点评谚语+引出话题(评论那句话) (背诵引用谚语的通用句型) 首先依据背景材料来提出问题,“从戒烟的问题引出做任何事情都需要坚强的意志,需要坚持到底,不可半途而废。” 第二步:观点+举例(或分析重要性、原因) 此为主体段落 可以正反论证 分析这一问题 可举成功的实例进行论证 也可分析原因或重要性 第三步:点题收尾+提出劝诫 总结来论证坚强的意志对于成功的重大意义

4) 范文

第一段 点评谚语+引出话题 ①It is universally acknowledged that people cannot succeed to achieve their targets without a strong will and persistence. ②One of the most typical examples is that in present-day society, a growing number of people give up or fail to quit smoking just because of their poor willpower during the process. 以下词组加强记忆: 1)achieve their targets/dreams/goals完成目标 2)意志、坚持:will willpower persistence perseverance determination 第一段 描述现象 ① 引出主题(用自己的语言解释题目) It is universally acknowledged that…众所周知… 其他可以替代使用的句型有 1)It can not be denied that…毫无疑问… 2)It has been wildly proved that…事实证明… 3)There is no denying that…毫无疑问… 4)There is a growing agreement/ awareness that… 越来越多的人意识到… 人们在…上有着广泛的认同… ② 评论题目中提到的这句话:从戒烟的问题引出做任何事情都需要坚强的意志,需要坚持到底,不可半途而废 第二段 分析原因 第二段 分析原因 A variety of factors may account for this 主题句:注意套用句型,表明本段是要论述坚强意志重要的phenomenon as follows. ①For one thing, no one can 原因。 deny the fact that persistence is the key point in A 1) A variety of factors may account for this phenomenon accomplishing one’s task. It is of importance for as follows有很多的原因可以解释这一现象 people to stick to their original aim. A great number of 2)Several reasons, in my opinion, can be identified to dragsters would stop smoking a couple of days after account for this phenomenon. they have made their determination, but only a few of ① 原因一:意志是成功的关键 them may succeed in the end. ②For another, the 1)accomplishing one’s task:完成任务 people who cannot quit smoking may easily be 2)stick to their original aim:坚持最初的目标 affected by his circumstance and surroundings. In that 3)made their determination:下定决心 case, people tend to fail to resist various temptations ② 原因二:受周围环境影响、难以抵制诱惑 around them. 1)circumstance and surroundings:环境

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段 第三段 点题收尾+提出劝诫 From what has been discussed above, we may safely come to the conclusion that only by concentrating on the object and strong self-discipline can we obtain our goals successfully in the future,just as the old popular saying goes, “Where there is a will, there is a way.” 2) resist various temptations:抵制各种诱惑 第三段 总结评述 主题句:点题、提出劝诫 strong self-discipline:严格的自律 discipline:纪律、训练 以另一个谚语结尾

3. 图表类:全英文提示+图表 1)例题

Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Education Pays based on the statistics provided in the chart below(Weekly earnings in 2010). Please give a brief description of the chart first and then make comments on it .You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

Education: A Worthy Investment Weekly earnings in 2010($)

Source: US Bureau of Labor Statistics

2)写作框架:三段式

第一段:说明图表

主题句+图表说明1+图表说明2+图表说明3 第二步:说明引起变化的原因

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主题句+原因1+原因2+原因3

第三步:第三段、说明影响或者提出解决办法 主题句+建议+前景预测

3)开头描述图表的必背句型:

1. As is indicated/ revealed/ showed in the above graph, there have been some obvious changes in…. 2. The above bar chart clearly shows us…

3. As can be seen from the graph/ chart above, it shows the general trend in…

3)范文

第一段 描述图表 The above bar chart clearly shows us education pays in 2010. ① We see that one with higher education background earns more money weekly than those with lower ones. ②For instance, the college students with no degree get paid $712 per week whereas those with a Bachelor’s degree can earn $1038. 第二段 分析图表变化的原因 Several reasons, in my opinion, can be identified to account for this phenomenon. ①To begin with, compared with those with comparatively lower education degree, people who have received higher education possess considerably wider knowledge, more remarkable learning and research ability, greater innovation and most of all, resourceful social network, all of which are essential to a high-income work. ②What’s more, the higher one’s education degree is, the bigger platform he will have to show his ability. ③For example, his college, university, or research institute will organize various job fairs for them to communicate face to face with employers. 段 第三段 提出解决方法 This phenomenon tells us that education is a worthy investment. ①Therefore, substantial education investment should be strengthened. ②While us, al college students, should study harder to build our country and strive for a better life for ourselves. 第一段 描述图表 引出主题, 注意描述图片用的句型 ① 说明图表一:概括,图表的变化 ② 说明图表二:细节,用一个数据举例说明 第二段 分析原因 主题句:说明原因的固定句型 ① 原因一:学历高的能力更强 连用4个并列名词论证 ② 原因二:高学历者有更大平台发辉 ③:举例法: 招聘会 第三段 措施 主题句:重申图表主题 ① 措施一:增加教育投入 ② 措施二:作为学生该怎么做

4. 提纲类作文:2-3个中文提示,严格按照中文提示写

1) 范文一Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic:Getting to Know the World outside the Campus. You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:

1) 大学生了解社会的必要性。

2) 了解社会的途径(大众媒介、社会服务等) 3)你打算则么做。

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