专题强化练(十) 短文改错
Passage 1(2018·全国卷Ⅲ)
It was Monday morning，and the writing class had just begin. Everyone was silent，wait to see who would be called upon to read his and her paragraph aloud.Some of us were confident and eager take part in the class activity；others were nervous and anxious.I had done myself homework，but I was shy.I was afraid that to speak in front of a larger group of people.At that moment，I remembered that my father once said，“The classroom is a place for learning and that include learning from textbooks，and mistake as well.”Immediate，I raised my hand.
答案和解析：
It was Monday morning，and the writing class had just beginwait.Everyone was silent， to see who would be called upon to begunwaitingandread his her paragraph aloud.Some of us were confident and
oreager
take part in the class activity；others were nervous and
myself
homework，but I was shy.I was afraid that\\ my/the
anxious.I had done
larger
to speak in front of a group of people.At that moment，I
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includesmistakes
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Immediate
well.” ，I raised my hand.
Immediately
第一处：begin改为begun。考查时态。根据语境可知，此处为过去完成时，故应用过去分词。
第二处：wait改为waiting。考查非谓语动词。此处表示伴随，且与everyone为逻辑上的主谓关系，故用现在分词。
第三处：and改为or。考查连词。此处表示选择而非并列，故将and改为or。
第四处：eager后加to。考查固定搭配。be eager to do sth.“渴望做某事”为固定搭配，故在eager后加to。
第五处：myself改为my/the。考查限定词。此处特指“我的作业”，故将myself改为my/the。
第六处：删除afraid后的that。考查连词。be afraid to do sth.“害怕做某事”为固定搭配，故that多余。
第七处：larger改为large。考查形容词。此处无比较级含义，故用原级。
第八处：include改为includes。考查主谓一致。该句为一般现在时，主语为that，故谓语动词用第三人称单数形式。
第九处：mistake改为mistakes。考查名词的数。根据语境可知，此处表示“从课本和错误中学习”，mistake“错误”为可数名词，应使用复数形式，即mistakes。
第十处：Immediate改为Immediately。考查副词。此处为副词作状语，故将Immediate改为Immediately。
Passage 2(2019·福建泉州高三质量检测)
Last weekend, my British friend, Jim, spotted paper-cutting stand when we were wandering on the street.Had never seen paper-cuts, he
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immediately bought one.Therefore, the seller shook her head at the moment she saw the 100-yuan note Jim handed over to her.She had no changes! How disappointed Jim was! He was about to quit while I took out my cellphone, scan the QR code on the stand and paid five yuan.Jim was very surprising.I explained to her that nowadays we could pay with a cellphone for almost everything.“Wow! ” Jim said, “The paper-cut looks great, and the payment method seems even great！”
答案和解析：
Last weekend, my British friend, Jim, spotted paper-cutting Hadstand when we were wandering on the street. never seen
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Therefore
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However
the moment she saw the 100-yuan note Jim handed over to
changes
her.She had no ！ How disappointed Jim was! He was about to
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I took out my cellphone, the QR code on the whenscanned
surprisingherstand and paid five yuan.Jim was very .I explained to surprisedhimthat nowadays we could pay with a cellphone for almost everything.“Wow! ” Jim said, “The paper-cut looks great, and the great
payment method seems even ！”
greater
第一处：考查冠词。句意：上周末，我和我的朋友Jim闲逛的时候，他看到一个卖剪纸的摊点。由于第一次提及摊位，stand为可数名词，故用不定冠词，spotted后加a。
第二处：考查非谓语动词。句意：从来没见过剪纸，他立刻买了
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一个。分析句子可知，have seen作非谓语，与其逻辑主语he为主谓关系，故用现在分词形式，把Had改为Having。
第三处：考查副词。句意：但是当商贩看见Jim递给她的是100元钞票时，她摇了摇头。分析句子可知，商贩没有零钱，前后句为转折关系，故把Therefore改为However。
第四处：考查介词。句意：但是当商贩看见Jim递给她的是100元钞票时，她摇了摇头。分析句子可知，at the moment she saw the 100-yuan note Jim handed over to her.为the moment引导的时间状语从句，故去掉at。
第五处：考查名词。句意：商贩没有零钱。change零钱为不可数名词，故把changes改为change。
第六处：考查时间状语从句。句意：他正准备放弃的时候，我拿出手机，扫描摊位上的二维码，支付了五元。本句为句型be about to do sth.when正要做某事的时候突然，故把while改为when。
第七处：考查动词时态。句意：他正准备放弃的时候，我拿出手机，扫描摊位上的二维码，支付了五元。scan是与took out，paid并列的谓语动词，故也要用过去式，把scan改为scanned。
第八处：考查形容词。句意：Jim非常惊讶。描述人的感受，用过去分词形式，故把surprising改为surprised。
第九处：考查代词。句意：我向他解释，如今在中国我们可以用手机买任何东西。Jim为男性，故用him，把her改为him。
第十处：考查比较级。句意：剪纸看起来很不错，但是支付方案更棒。分析句子，Jim对手机支付感到很惊讶，因而用比较级，把great改为greater。
Passage 3(2019·深圳高三调研)
This afternoon, I went home by bus as usual.I was listening music
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when I suddenly noticed the bus stop that I should get off.Then I hurried off a bus.But when I arrived home, I find that my wallet was gone—some money and several important card were in it.Eager to get the wallet back, so I rushed to the bus company for help.Lucky, at the Lost and Found office, I saw my wallet.I felt so exciting that I wanted to thank the person who had turned them in.However, I was told the man hadn't left his name.How a great man!
答案和解析：
This afternoon, I went home by bus as usual.I was listening
that
music when I suddenly noticed the bus stop I should get
whereafind
off.Then I hurried off bus.But when I arrived home, I that
thefoundcard
my wallet was gone—some money and several important were
cardsin it.Eager to get the wallet back，
I rushed to the bus company for
Luckyhelp.， at the Lost and Found office, I saw my wallet.I felt so
Luckilyexcitingthem
that I wanted to thank the person who had turned exciteditHowin.However, I was told the man hadn't left his name. a great
Whatman!
第一处：考查介词。短语listen to sth.“听”，后跟介词to，故在music前添加to。
第二处：考查定语从句关系词。本句为定语从句修饰先行词bus stop且先行词在从句中作地点状语，that改为where。
第三处：考查冠词。bus为可数名词，此处表示特指作者乘坐的那辆公交车，故a改为the。
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