英语写作逻辑词

uld be correct for all the other directions. Problem solving type:

?point out some problems( at least two) …and give helpfu

l suggestions as to solve the problem.

?How should the land be used? Give your design.

?Your grandpa retired…unhappy and depressed…trying to make him cheerful.

?Make two or three suggestions on how to improve the traffic in Beijing.

[范文及学生习作分析讲解]

1. When your mother comes home from work, she finds the living room in a terrible mess. She asks you the reasons. You tell her what happened.

学生习作:

1)When I got home, I found that there was a mouse eating an apple on the table. I put down my bag slowly and wanted to give it a sudden attack, but the mouse saw me and ran away. So I began to run after it here and there .But I couldn't catch it. So you see the living room was in such a terrible mess.

2)When I came back, I found the door open. I was very puzzled because I knew at that time my parents still at theirs office. Suddenly I saw a thief in our living room, searching for some money. So I dialed 110 for help. A minute later, two policemen came, and caught the thief. Luckily, he didn’t find anything useful.

答案:This afternoon I was doing my homework when my neighbor Aunt Zhang came in with her little son Xiao Ming. She asked me to look after him for a while as she was out.

Shortly after his mother left, Xiao Ming began to cry. I brought out all the toys and played with him. Soon he stopped crying and began to play with me. He ran about happily in the room and scattered the toys on the floor and made a mess. It was he who made the room like this.

2. You have been given a chance to design a class meeting. You can choose whatever topic to make the meeting meaningful and instructive. What might be your topic? Why would you choose this topic? Give two or more reasons to explain.

学生习作:

1)I would like to choose the topic ―believe in yourself.‖ First, if people believe themselves, they will have the confidence to do better in their work or study. Secondly, when people meet the difficulty in their lives, they need ―believe in themselves‖ to help them solve those difficulty.

2)I prefer to talk about traffic in Beijing with my classmates. Because there are too many cars on the road and many people especially middle school students didn’t follow the traffic rules. We must pay attention to this. It is do a lot of harm to our life. And in 2008, Beijing will be held Olympic Games. When a foreigner saw a Chinese people didn’t follow the traffic rules, they will have a bad impression. In addition, I want to encourage my classmates to take buses so as to ease the traffic flow.

答案:I think I may design a class meeting entitled ―Helping the Disabled.‖ First of all, being disabled is challenging in society. Disabled people need society’s respect and help. So the class meeting can pass on some information about showing respect to them. Secondly, if people all try to help the disabled, it can reduce the burden on society, which may influence the development of the whole society in many ways.

3. About fifty students from Hong Kong are coming to your school next week. You will show them around it. Please tell us how you will introduce your school to them.

答案:First, I will invite those students from Hong Kong to pay a visit to our schoolyard. During the visit, I will tell them something about our school life. Then I will take them to the headmaster’s office and introduce the history of our school to them. Finally, I am going to tell them our plan in the future.

4. On the morning of June 7, Li Hua is taking a bus on his way to take the entrance examination. Unfortunately, he is caught in a traffic jam because of an accident. How can he manage to there in time? Please think out two or three ways for him.

答案:First of all, he can persuade the bus driver to allow him to get off so that he can walk out of the heavy traffic jam to take another bus or a taxi. Or he can get off and ask an assistant in a nearby shop to lend him a bike. Since it is an important day for the high school graduates, dialing 110 and getting help from the police is one of the choices as well.

【模拟试题】

1. Yesterday when you got home all in wet, your mother was ver

y surprised and asked ,―what’s the matter with you?‖ Please tell us what happened.

2. Yesterday you went to school by bus as usual. But you rushed out of the bus at the second stop . Please tell us what happened.

3. One day while Li Ming was walking along the street, he noticed a lot of people looking into the sky.

Suppose you are Li Ming ,please tell us what happened.

4. One day when you came to my house, I found you walking with a limp. What happened to you? Please tell me.

5. Yesterday you and your friend went to buy some lottery tickets. Your friend asked, ―If you won one million yuan, what would you do with so much money?‖ Please tell him.

6. Traffic jams are a very serious problem in Beijing. The streets are full of cars, buses, and bikes almost every day. To make matters worse, some people do not follow the traffic rules.

Suppose you are discussing this problem in your English class. Please make two or three suggestions on how to improve the traffic in Beijing.

7. Suppose we are having a free talk in an English class. The topic is the best way of transport in Beijing when we are out getting around. To take a bus, the cityrail, a taxi or to ride a bike? Please tell us your choices) (at least two or three) and why you prefer them.

8. You are in the sitting room talking to your good friend over the phone and crying. Your mother also feels very sad. This is what you tell your friend.

9. This morning you received a letter from Beijing Medical University saying that you had been admitted to the University.

Please tell us what you think of it and what you want to do then?

10. You are talking with one of your close friends about Chinese Festivals. You say to him, ―I like the Mid-autumn Day best.‖ He asks, ―Why?‖

You tell him why and be sure to give him your reasons.

11. Last week your parents were both on a business trip and you were left home alone for a few days. Tell your friends that a difficult (or a happy) time you had during those days.

【试题答案】

1. Yesterday when I was walking along the bank on my way hom

e after school, suddenly I heard someone crying for help. I rushed towards the riverside and saw a boy struggling in the water. At that time I jumped into the water without hesitation. With the help of some other people, the boy was saved. And I went home immediately without being seen.

2. I was unlucky yesterday .The bus broke down on the half way . The bus driver began to repair it. Ten minutes passed, and I became impatient with waiting. So I rushed out of the bus and had to wait for another one. What was worse, when I got to the school ,the class had already began. I was late for school.

3. I stopped and looked up too. There! A young man was standing at the top of a hoist. He threatened to jump off it. How dangerous the situation was! Soon the police arrived. After thirty minutes persuasion, the young man finally gave up his mind. Not until then did I calm myself down.

4. I was unlucky this morning. I had just stepped out of the bus when a young man rode hurriedly and knocked me down. Luckily, I wasn’t hurt badly except my ankle. I had seen the doctor before I came here. The doctor told me it was nothing serious. Don’t worry. I’ll be all right soon.

5. One million yuan! That sounds great to me! You know, I’m expecting it for a long time. Of course, it would be wise to put away some money for the future. However, the first thing I want to do is to make my mother’s dream come true. My mum has always had a wish for taking a journey around the world, but her income could never afford it. If I won the money, I would be very pleased to help her.

6. To improve traffic in Beijing, I think, first, we should widen or build more roads to provide better traffic conditions. Second, the government should encourage more people to use public transport and bicycles so as to ease the traffic flow. Third, everyone in Beijing, especially those who drive or walk on the street should follow the traffic rules.

7. As far as city transport is concerned, I prefer buses because they are cheapest way to get around. On the other hand, compared with the cityrail, there are many more bus routes throughout the town, which make any trip easy. As the expense of using taxis is much greater, I seldom take them. Sometimes I ride a bike because by this means I am free to go wherever I would like to, the places which buses or the cityrail do not reach.

8. Today I am feeling very sad because our pet dog, Huanhuan, is missing. Whenever I got home, he would run over to the door and welcome me by shaking its tail. Then he would bring my slippers to me. But yesterday I could not find it anywhere. The whole fami

ly started a search for it, but in vain. I am thinking of looking for it again after school.

9. When I heard from it, I was feeling quite excited. I have been dreaming of becoming an excellent doctor from my childhood. I want to help the sick and save them. Now I would have my dream come true.

I am sure that I will keep on working hard with my future studies so as to achieve my goals.

10. First, the mid-autumn Day comes in a beautiful season. Autumn is a time of harvest and everyone feels happy. Second, the day is a time of family reunion. All the family members get together to share their happiness. Third, the delicious moon cakes are also a reason for my favor for the day. The beautiful moon tale also adds some fun to this day. We can enjoy the round moon at the same time having the moon cakes.

11. I really had a hard time last week. You know, my parents would wake me up every morning, but during those days I had to get up myself. On the first night I set the alarm at 6:00, but it did not wake me up at all the next morning. I was scolded by my teacher. Afterwards, I was bought three new clocks and set them all together. What noisy morning I had

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范文1.

A Notice

Students of Senior I will visit the Beijing Zoo on Saturday, April 15. The Beijing Zoo has a history of more than one hundred years. It is one of the biggest zoos in the world. There we can see all kinds of animals, such as pandas, elephants, lions, tigers and so on. In the morning we will be free to visit the different areas of the

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