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短文改错二轮精炼（4）
【由四川省资阳市2014模拟改编】 短文改错。
请你改正下面短文中的错误。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Once a king asked an artist to paint a picture by him. He told the artist he didn’t want to
any shadows in picture, just sunshine. When the king saw the finish picture, he was
disappointed. Without shadows, everything in the picture looked flat or unreal. The point of the
story was that we need both shadows and sunshine to have a completely picture, just as we
need both rain and sun to have a living world. People, too, needs both sadness and happiness.
We often learn important lesson during sad times. So when we feel sad, we should try to think
about that we might learn from the experience. 【参考答案】 一、参考答案
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1. 未标注符号或符号标注不规范一律不给分。
2. 答题位置（需修改的词下方或需添加位置的下方）不对（如答在上方或相距甚远的位置）一律不给分。 短文改错 Dear Peter,
Thanks very much on inviting me to your birthday 1. _______ party on Sunday. I’d like very much come but 2. _______ had an examination on Monday morning. It is 3. _______ a very important exam but I can’t afford to 4. _______ fail it. I’ll spend all the whole weekend reading 5. _______ 小学+初中+高中
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and prepare for it. So I’m really sorry that I 6. _______ won’t be able to come in this time. Hope you 7. _______ can understand. I’ll take this chance to wish 8. _______ you wonderful time on your birthday. Happy 9. _______ birthday, Peter, and many happy return of the day! 10. ______ Yours, Li Ming 答案及解析
1. on 改为 for。动词 thank 与名词 thanks 通常与介词 for 搭配。 2. much 后加 to。 I’d like to do something 为固定结构。 3. had 改为 have。综观全文时态可知。
4. but 改为 so。根据上下文逻辑， 此处应为因果关系。
5. 删去 all。all 与 the whole 重复， 只能保留一处， 由于在此题型中， 只有多一个单词的可能， 故此处只能删去 all。
6. prepare 改为 preparing。与上文的 reading 形成平行结构， 以满足“spend some time on sth./in doing sth.这一句型的需要。
7. 删去 in。含有 this， that， last， next 等的时间状语前不加任何介词。 8. 此行无错。 9. wonderful 前加 a。
10. return 改为 returns。return 此处为名词， many happy returns of the day 意为“祝你健康长寿”。
【由浙江省2014高考英语模拟冲刺卷改编】 短文改错。
下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该漏字符号下写上该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（ \\ ）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该横线下写上修改后的词。 注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 小学+初中+高中