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学习点2 遇到这种混合类的话题,SIMON只是简单地说了下文章会说什么,并没有说明立场,也没有说具体的观点

从这一点可知:作文开头段不需要复杂,简单即可

Technology has had an impact on relationships inbusiness, education and sociallife. Firstly, telephones and the Internet allow business people in different countries to interactwithout ever meeting each other. Secondly,services like Skype create new possibilities

for relationships between students and teachers. Forexample, a student can now take video lessons with a teacher in a different city or

country. Finally, many people use social networks, likeFacebook, to make new friends and find people who share common interests, and they interact through their computers rathert han face to face.

学习点1:有些同学经常问我多观点的段落怎么处理,Simon这段话是个例子。大家可以看到,哪怕是多观点,也不是一语带过,内容的充实是很重要的,看最后一句话,使用faceBOOK作为例子,并用定语从句形容PEOPLE,增加了段落的内容

学习点2:create new possibilities 替代我们常用的provideopportunities for 学习点3:rather than后面可以加副词短语,留意和instead of的对比 学习点4:学习黄色标注的词伙

On the one hand, these developments can be extremelypositive. Cooperation between people in different countries was much more difficult when communication waslimited to written letters or telegrams. Nowadays, interactions byemail, phone or video are almost as good as face-to-face meetings, and many ofus benefit from these interactions, either in work or social contexts. On the other hand, the availability of new communication technologies can also have the result ofisolating people and discouraging realinteraction. For example, many young people choose to make friends online rather than mixing with their peers in the real world, and these ‘virtual’ relationshipsare a poor substitute forreal friendships.

学习点1:注意一些很多学生常会犯错的地方,譬如说 limited to 这里的to是个介词,需要加名词,然后benefit 是不及物动词,没有被动语态 学习点2:mix with = socialize with

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