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写作组合练 训练3
Ⅰ.应用文写作
假定你是李华，正在新西兰学习，你计划寒假期间在当地旅行，请写一封e-mail向旅行社询问相关的旅行信息。
内容应包括：
1．旅行信息(如景点等)； 2．当地特色(如食品等)； 3．注意事项。 注意：1.词数80左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头语和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Dear Sir or Madam，
Sincerely yours，
Li Hua
【写作指导】
本篇应用文写作要求学生给新西兰的旅行社写一封e-mail，咨询旅行信息和当地特色。本文属于书信类应用文中的咨询信。人称用第一人称，时态用一般现在时。
本文可分三段写作。首段作自我介绍，表明写信的目的；第二段为主体段，写清想要咨询的问题，如当地有什么景点，有什么特色食品以及有哪些注意事项；第三段表达希望能尽快收到对方回应的愿望。在遣词造句上，学生可以使用咨询信常见的套句，如“I'm writing to ask for information about...”，“I would be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience.”等；此外，应尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句型，如定语从句、同位语从句、倒装句等；还应注意合理使用连接成分，
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以增强文章的逻辑性和层次感。
【参考范文】 Dear Sir or Madam， I'm Li Hua，a Chinese student studying in New Zealand.I'm writing to ask for information about your agency's New Zealand's travel for the winter vacation.
Could you tell me the departure time and traveling routes? As we know，New Zealand is famous for its beautiful scenery and places of interest and I want to know more details about these.Besides, I'm also interested in the local food.How much do I have to pay for the travel? At length，are there other things I should be aware of?
I'd be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience.
Sincerely yours，
Li Hua 【导学号：85602038】
Ⅱ.读后续写
阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。 A 56-year-old Montreal man looking to shake off a mid-life depression walked around the world in 11 years，returning this week to Canada，looking very happy after realizing a dream.A bit thinner and with a few more gray hairs，Jean Beliveau was pushing a three-wheel stroller that carried his sleeping bag，clothes and a first aid box.Walking at a light cheerful pace，he expects to come full circle，arriving in Montreal on October 16 after passing through the capital，Ottawa.
He stopped only briefly to eat some food and described some of his adventures on this trip to curious strangers，passing on a joy and peacefulness he gained from total freedom.He did not know where he would sleep that night，depending on no-one and with little money in his pocket.But he was not worried in the least—it has been this way for the past 11 years and he is fine with it.
In Montreal，he will reunite with his longtime girlfriend Luce Archambault，who has supported him throughout his extraordinary adventure and even created a website detailing his travels：www.walk.org.
Beliveau left Montreal on the day of his 45th birthday，August 18，2000，after his
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small sign business closed down.He decided to run around the world to try to escape that pain in his life.Archambault and his two children from a previous marriage did not try to hold him back.“It was cool，” said his son Thomas Eric，who was 20-year-old at the time.
Over 11 years，he traveled across deserts and mountains.He fell in love for nine days in Mexico，wore a long beard in Sudan，and ate insects in Africa，dog in South Korea and snake in China.Beliveau only fell seriously ill once in Algeria，was robbed only once by two young drunks in South Africa，and was put into prison only once in Ethiopia for no apparent reason.It was also in Ethiopia that he was once in despair，which nearly caused him to quit and go home.He said he felt very lonely.Archambault back in Montreal convinced him to go on.
注意：
1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；
2．应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语； 3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1：
Certainly，Beliveau slept under a few bridges and in shelters for the homeless. Paragraph 2：
Today，he is penniless，but insists he is richer for his experiences. 【写作指导】
本文是一篇记叙文。讲述了Beliveau生意失败后陷入了痛苦绝望之中，为了
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