Book 5 Unit 1 Great Scientists Period 6 Using language
编者:王海虹 修编:李慧
学习目标
1. 掌握说服性信函的格式和特点。
2. 掌握说服性信函常用的表达方式,并能灵活运用。
3. 能够根据文章提示,发表自己的观点,写一封说服性信函。 自主合作探究
如何用英文写劝说信
说服性信函首先要符合信函的格式。其次,要具备说服性议论文的特点。一般来说,说服性议论文分四个基本段落:第一段引出话题;第二、三段提出正反两方面的观点,陈述各自理由;第四段总结利弊,表明作者态度。在具体写作中要注意下列几点:
1.话题的提出要开门见山,不要拖泥带水;
2.正反对比论据要正确,条理要清楚,语言应准确、精炼; 3.作者的观点必须鲜明,不能模棱两可; 4.议论文的主体时态多用一般现在时;
5.尽量避免同一单词、句型的重复使用,多采用同义词、相似结构以使表达多样化。
说服性信函的常用表达句式
①I am writing to express my views concerning...
②I don't think it is a very good way to...For example,...Worst of all,... ③In my opinion,it is wrong to...
④As far as I am concerned,we should...
⑤The main disadvantages of...are as follows. First...;Second...;Third...;Finally...
⑥I would very much like to advise you to... 当堂练习
假设你是李萍,你的笔友王强最近沉迷于电脑游戏而不能自拔,严重影响了学习和身心健康。请你给他写一封信劝说他戒掉这一不良习惯,并对他的学习生活给出自己的建议。 注意:1.词数120左右; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 [思路分析]
本篇作文可以从以下几个方面入手:
1.作者首先要陈述自己的担忧;2.指出沉迷于电脑游戏的危害; 3.表达作者的希望并提出建议。 [词汇热身]
1.迷上/沉迷于_____________________ 2.首先__________________________
3.此外____________________________ 4.暴力__________________________
5.脱离;放弃_____________________ 6.开阔某人的眼界
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7.对……有害_____________________ [句式温习]
1.虽然人们普遍认为电脑游戏有趣而且能激发想象力,但如果不加节制,他们会在许多方面对你造成危害。
Although________________computer games are interesting and can inspire our imagination,yet if you abuse them,they will ________________in many ways. 2.更糟糕的是,一些游戏充满暴力,这对你的心理健康会造成危害。
__________________,some games are full of violence,________will be harmful to your mental health.
3.越早越好。The___________________________________________.
4.为了有意义的生活,你可以多读些好书,多锻炼或参加一些社会活动来开阔你的眼界。__________________a meaningful life,you can read more good books,take more exercise to build you up or______________some social activities to broaden your horizons. [连句成篇]
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