【亮点说明】本篇书面表达要点全面，结构紧凑，是一篇较好的范文。这篇短文使用了大量的短语，为文章增色不少，如: have fun玩得开心，What’s more另外。还使用了定语从句I’d like to tell you that the International Student Center in our school will hold an annual holiday party in the school sports center this Saturday, whose theme is “fun”.和定语从句 Secondly, there will be a student concert where we can really entertain and relax ourselves.等多种句式结构，增加了文章的可读性。 5. 【河南省八市2018届高三上学期第二次测评】假定你是学生会主席李华。最近，一批来自澳大利亚的高中生将来你校访问。请你写一篇英语发言稿，介绍为他们安排的活动。内容包括： 1.参观校园；
2.观看介绍学校的短片；
3.体验中国的传统节日—重阳节（the Double Ninth Festival） 注意：
1.词数100左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Friends,
Welcome to our school.
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Yours, Li Hua 【答案】Dear
friends,
Welcome to our school. I’m Li Hua, president of the Student Council. Now I’d like to tell you something about the schedule for your visit.
First of all, I will show you around our campus so that you can get a general impression of our school. After that, you’ll watch a short video that will help you learn more about the history, characteristics, staff and students of our school. What’s more, you will participate in some activities to celebrate the Double Ninth Festival-one of the Chinese traditional festivals, which will provide a good opportunity for you to experience Chinese culture. I hope it will be an unforgettable experience for you.
In a word, I hope you can have a good stay with us and enjoy yourselves. Thanks.
Yours, Li Hua