2018届二轮复习短文改错原创试题10篇汇聚之三
【一】
I was only 12 when we moved to California. I remember that I enjoyed flying non-stop across a whole country and that I wasn’t very happy about leave my friends. But Dad think it’d be good for we all to live in a suburb instead in the middle of a city. And Uncle Jeff, his brother, who’d been living in California for about 20 years, were always telling us how wonderful California it was. He said it would be easily for Dad to get a job driving a taxi, that had been Dad’s job in New York. But we all agreed to try it for one year. Now we’ve been here for four years, and we all love it.
【答案】
【小题1】a改为the
【小题2】leave改为leaving 【小题3】think改为thought 【小题4】we改为us
【小题5】instead后加of 【小题6】were改为was 【小题7】去掉it
【小题8】easily改为easy 【小题9】that改为which 【小题10】But改为So/And 【解析】
【小题1】a改为the；考查定冠词和不定冠词；第二句across the whole country穿过整个国家中，the 特指whole country整个国家，定冠词也可特指上文提及的事物，而a表示泛指。故a改为the
【小题2】leave改为leaving；考查现在分词用法；第二句I wasn’t very happy about leaving my friends；离开我的朋友们我不开心。动名词作介词宾语介词about后接动词的现在分词形式，about doing sth.故leave改为leaving
【小题3】think改为thought；考查过去分词用法；第三句But Dad think?但是我爸爸认为??全文叙述使用一般过去时，故think改为thought
【小题4】we改为us；考查代词作介词宾语用法；第三句 be good for us all to live in?中，be good for sb.to do sth.里的sb.须为人称代词的宾格形式。代词作介词宾语，若是人称代词用作介词宾语，要注意用宾格。故we改为us.
【小题5】instead后加of；考查动词连接搭配；第三句中instead of in the middle of a city， instead意为“代替”“替代”，作副词用，通常位于句尾。如位于句首时常用逗号与后面阁开instead of是介宾短语，其意与instead相同，不同之处在于它后面常接宾语，且宾语多由名词、代词、介词、短语、动词 + ing 形式充当。故instead后加of 【小题6】were改为was；考查be动词用法；第四句And Uncle Jeff, his brother, who’d been living in California for about 20 years, were always telling us?叔叔Jeff，爸爸的兄弟，在加利福尼亚差不多生活了20年，一直告诉我们??中his brother, who’d been living in California for about 20 year是插入语，作为Uncle Jeff的补充说明。
Uncle Jeff后be动词为is的过去分词形式was，故were改为was 【小题7】去掉it；考查代词的用法；第四句中telling us how wonderful California was告诉我们加州是怎样的美好，这里由that引导的宾语从句，其中that被省略掉，宾语从句语序为v.+主语+谓语。而how wonderful California it was这是多么美好的加利福尼亚，单独来看这是一个完整的感叹句，与宾语从句结构不符。故去掉it 【小题8】easily改为easy；考查形容词用法；第五句中it would be easy for Dad to get a job driving a taxi对爸爸来说得到一个开出租车的工作很容易。It+be动词+adj.+for+sb.+to do sth.对某人来说做某事怎么样。这里be动词后须填形容词。故easily改为easy
【小题9】that改为which；考查非限制性定语从句；关系代词which在非限制性定语从句中所指代和修饰的可以是主句中的名词、形容词、短语、其他从句或整个主句，在从句中作主语、动词宾语、介词宾语或表语。第五句which had been Dad’s job in New York，这里的which指代前半段句子He said it would be easy for Dad to get a job driving a taxi。故that改为which
【小题10】But改为So/And；考查连词的用法；第六句So/And we all agreed to try it for one year而且我们同意用一年（的时间）去试试。文意表示家人愿意听取Uncle Jeff的建议，So/And表顺承，But表转折。故But改为So/And
【二】
I love camping. It is my favoritest way to spend the summer vacation. Last year, my family and I went camping in the countryside. It was one of the most excited experiences I had never had. We slept in a tent and went on a long walk every day. We cook over a fire and the food always tasted wonderfully. For a whole week, I saw lovely mountain views or breathed fresh air. At night, I heard the gentle wind blowing in the tree, and I felt so peaceful. It doesn’t cost many to camp, and what I believe it’s the best way to get close nature and enjoy its beauty. 【答案】
【小题1】 将favouritest改为favorite 【小题2】将excited改为exciting 【小题3】将never改为ever 【小题4】将. Cook改为cooked
【小题5】将wonderfull改为wonderful 【小题6】将or改为and 【小题7】将tree改为trees 【小题8】将. many—much 【小题9】what去掉
【小题10】 close 后加to 【解析】
【小题1】 文中第二句，将favouritest改为favorite。考察词义，favorite意思为最喜欢的，本来就含有“最”的涵义，没有比较级和最高级，故将favouritest改为favorite 【小题2】文中第四句，将excited改为exciting。excited表示\兴奋的\，指人、物对......感到兴奋；exciting表示\令人兴奋的、使人激动的\，指人、事、物本身让人兴奋、激动。这里是用来形容experiences，所以用exciting。
【小题3】文中第四句，将never改为ever。Never意思为永不，而ever是曾经，这句话
原本的意思应该是，这是我有过的最令人兴奋的经历，所以将never改为ever。
【小题4】文中第六句将，Cook改为cooked，考察时态，根据后面的tasted可以判断出，时态为一般过去式，故将cook改为cooked。
【小题5】文中第六句将，wonderfully改为wonderful。该小句主语是名词food，系动词tasted做谓语，宾语修饰主语food，wonderful修饰的是food而不是tasted，所以用wonderful而不是wonderfully
【小题6】文中第七句，将or改为and。 该句此处sawlovely mountain views美丽的山上视野与breathed fresh air呼吸新鲜空气是并列的成分而不是表示选择，所以将or改为and
【小题7】文中第八句，将tree改为trees。根据句意，这里应该是指风刮过树林，所以不可能只是一棵树，所以用复数形式将tree改为trees。
【小题8】文中第九句，将many—much。结合语境，这里的意思应该是爬山花不了多少钱，much通常用来代指钱。有固定句型it doesn’t takes too much这花不了多少钱。 【小题9】文中第九句what去掉。原句 I believe it’s the best way to get close nature我相信这是接近自然的最好方法。主语是I，谓语是believe，宾语是it’s the best way to get close nature，句子中不缺乏任何成分，所以what多余，去掉。
【小题10】文中第九句close后加to。 Get Close to是介词短语意思为接近某物，后面要跟宾语。而get close是接近，后面不能加宾语。而该句中又有宾语成分nature，故在close后加上to
【三】
Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. Thirty minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, I’ll think of this experience. 【答案】
【小题1】添加for
【小题2】past改为pasted 【小题3】feet改为foot 【小题4】when改为than 【小题5】a改为the
【小题6】other改为another 【小题7】do改为did
【小题8】possible改为possibly 【小题9】去掉it
【小题10】lose改为losing 【解析】
试题解析：考查句子改错
【小题1】添加for 考查动词用法。第二句“ Once I waited a bus to come at a stop”中waited后加for。wait表示等待，不能直接接等待的对象，wait for表示等待。句意：有一次我在一个公交站点等一辆公交。