2013届高考英语二轮复习热点专题限时训练：短文改错系列1
一、短文改错
1．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（?），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Three years ago, I became a student in an ordinary school． Disappointing as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I find the teachers patient and considerate． However, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class． I decided to make the best for it． I worked hardly and got along well with teachers and classmates． Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available． Soon, I became one of the top student in my class, what greatly increased my confidence and I got more motivated．
My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but that how you use it that determine who you are． 【答案】
【小题1】disappointing—disappointed 【小题2】find—found
【小题3】However—Besides或Also 【小题4】for—of
【小题5】hardly—hard
【小题6】teachers 前加my或the 【小题7】student—students 【小题8】what—which
【小题9】去掉but后的that
【小题10】determine—determines 【解析】
【小题1】disappointing修饰某事 disappointed修饰某人 【小题2】文章开头Three years ago所以应是过去时
【小题3】however但是 此处不存在转折关系。而是与前面的表示并列 【小题4】固定搭配make the best of 好好利用
【小题5】hard的形容词 副词 相同，均为hard 而hardly表示几乎不 【小题6】老师应是特制的 故要加my或the 【小题7】one of 后面要用复数 表示 。。。之一
【小题8】非限制性定语从句。从句中缺主语，关系代词不能用what，用which 【小题9】but后已经是一个完整的句子，不用加that
【小题10】it后的that指代it 故从句中要用第三人称单数。
2．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文 中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词； 删除：把多余的词用斜线（\\）划掉；
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出改正后的词。 注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
The day before yesterday, my classmates and me went to the park near my school. Can you guess that what we did there? Not for amusement but to take part in a volunteer labour.They reached the park at nine o'clock. The whole class divided into three groups. Group One planted trees and watered flowers. Group Two was told to pick up litter leaving by the tourists and cleaned all the benches. The group where I was in wiped all the equipments in the Children's Playground. All of us worked hardly.Before noon we finished working. Each of us fell a little bit tired, so we were happy because we had done a good deed. 【答案】
【小题1】me—I 【小题2】that 去掉 【小题3】They-We
【小题4】was divided into 【小题5】 leaving—left 【小题6】where—which
【小题7】equipments—equipment 【小题8】hardly—hard 【小题9】fell—felt 【小题10】so--but 【解析】
【小题1】and表并列，前后的人称应相同 所以应用主格I 【小题2】guess后已经是一个完整的句子，不用加that 【小题3】本文讲的是“我们”所以应是we
【小题4】班里的人应该是“被分成三组”所以应是被动语态 【小题5】句意：拣被留下的垃圾 所以应是left
【小题6】定语从句 in后面缺少宾语 不能用where 应该有which 【小题7】equipment为不可数名词，不能加S
【小题8】hard的形容词 副词均为hard hardly意为几乎不 【小题9】句意：我们感到有点儿累 感觉feel 过去时为felt 【小题10】我们很累但很开心 前后转折 故用but
3．假设英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文 中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧）, 并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。
Yesterday morning, I was surprising to hear that my best friend Allee has been
hit by a car and was in hospital. The other day when he was going to cross a street,
he was such careful that he didn’t go until he saw the traffic light to turn green. But
hardly had he got to the middle of the street while he saw a car suddenly appear on
his right-hand side and come directly towards them. It was too late for Allee to
escape. He was hit by the car or was thrown a few meters away. He was sent to the
nearest hospital immediately and had operation. When I went to see him, he was
out of dangers but still looked pale. I sincere hope he will recover and return to normal as soon as possible. 【答案】
【小题1】surprising 改成surprised 【小题2】has 改成had 【小题3】such 改成so 【小题4】to去掉
【小题5】while 改成when 【小题6】them改成 him 【小题7】or 改成 and
【小题8】operation 前面加an 【小题9】dangers 改成danger 【小题10】sincere 改成sincerely 【解析】
【小题1】修饰主语用过去分词转换的形容词 【小题2】他被车撞是之前已经发生的事情 【小题3】后面的形容词，用so修饰 【小题4】see sb do sth
【小题5】固定句型hardly…when…一…就… 【小题6】him指代Allee
【小题7】上下文不是选择关系，而是并列关系 【小题8】operation是可数名词，用a修饰 【小题9】固定词组out of danger 【小题10】副词修饰动词
4．此题要求改正所给短文的错误。对标有题号的每一行作出判断：如无错误，在该行右边横线上划一个勾（√）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正：