2018届二轮复习短文改错模拟训练10篇之三 【一】
Trying to come to a decision complete on your own can be risky. Some decisions are very important that they shouldn’t be made without talking to others first. There have several advantages if you consult the persons you trust. For one thing, they can give you valuable advices and they may point out some things you may have been overlooked. For another, friends may stop you make big mistakes.
When consulting others about important decisions, you should keep two things of mind. The first one is that you need to find someone whom you respect enough to trust their judgment. The second thing to consider is how to do if you disagree with this person. Maybe turning to a third or fourth person for help is a best option. In word, making any big decision alone can lead to problems. Talking to friends or family members first are always a good idea. 答案
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keep two things of mind. The first one is that you need to find someone whom you respect enough to trust their judgment. The second thing to consider is how to do if you disagree with this person. Maybe turning to a third or fourth person for help is a best option. In ∧ word, making any big decision alone can lead to problems. Talking to friends or family members first are always a good idea. 【二】
Mistakes are something did, said or believed, as a result of wrong thinking or understanding, lack of knowledges or skills. No one is perfect, but no one makes no mistake. Because many people are afraid of making mistakes, we don’t believe, say or do much. They behaved like this just because they want to make no mistake. As I said, it’s impossible. Being afraid of making mistakes is mistake itself. Only through mistakes can there be discover or progress. Making mistakes for seeking truth is much more better than doing nothing. Mistakes are the best teachers which guide us through difficulties. Don’t let mistakes scare you. Let’s learn on mistakes. 答案
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which guide us through difficulties. Don’t let mistakes scare you. Let’s learn on mistakes. that/who from 【三】
During the last summer holiday, my parents and I paid visit to my grandparents by train. There was a large number of people and the train was crowded, but everyone helped those who had lots of baggages and behaved politely. Along the way, we enjoyed beautifully views. At first,
we saw one hill after another. Then which came into view were fields with green crops. In a six-hour trip, we arrived at my grandparents’ house. Exhausted though I felt, but I was happy to see my grandparents，whom I haven’t seen for a long time. It’s really an excited trip because it was the first time that I had taken so a long-distance train. 答案
1.pay a visit 2.was→were 3.baggages→baggage 4. beautifully →beautiful 5.which→what 6.In→After 7.去掉but 8.haven’t→ hadn’t 9.excited→ exciting 10.so→such 【四】
There is only one month left before the college entrance examination．So most of my classmates feel more stressing than before because we real think that every minute counts，and as a result，many choose to stay up every night．
When asked，some classmates say it’s very quiet at the night，thus they can concentrate．Some are forced to stay up late because the endless papers．Meanwhile，others believe the more hour they spend on study，the higher marks they would get．
For my opinion，they shouldn’t stay up too late during the last month before the examination．Instead，we should have enough rest，so as we can be in a good mood every day and continue to make rapidly progress．I wish an of us success． 答案
第二句：stressing→stressed；real→really
第三句：删除night前的the；或者at→in/during 第四句：because后加of
第五句：hour→hours；would→will
第六句：For→In；they→we
第七句：as→that；rapidly→rapid 【五】 Dear Peter,
I am writing to ask that you are able to do me a favor. I want to have a pen friend, hopefully, a girl in her early twenties, and with interests similarly to mine. In my mind, he is someone interesting in traveling, swimming, and playing table tennis. However, it would be better for her to have a pet dog as I have been kept one at home for some time. With such a pen friend, I hope I can share with her our experiences in traveling, taking care pets, or whatever we have in common. I believed I will improve my English by doing so and learn more about her countries. I am
looking forward to hear from you soon. Best regards,
Li
Hua
答案
1. that-if\\whether 2. similarly- similar 3. he-she 4.