第二节 方法运用于命题
一、提纲类作文
(2017·天津)
假设你是李津,与你以前的外籍教师Mrs Green 一直保持联系。近日她来信询问你的近况,请根据以下提示给她回复一封邮件。
(1)简要介绍自己的学习和生活;
(2)告知你已成为八月底在津举办的第十三届全运会的志愿者,并介绍为此所做的准备(如深入了解天津等);
(3)希望她有机会重访天津。 注意:
(1)词数不少于100;
(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯; (3)开头已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:第十三届全运会the 13th National Games 法宝1 “五审”定调子
(1)体裁:告知类应用文,注意告知类邮件的格式; (2)人称:以第一人称为主;
(3)时态:以一般现在时和一般将来时为主;
(4)要点:介绍学习和生活;成为志愿者;邀请重访天津;
(5)层次:分为四段:第一、二段问候并介绍自己的学习和生活以及成为在津举办的全运会的志愿者;第三段邀请外籍教师重访天津;第四段为结束语。 法宝2 “韵色”得高分
该文除简单句外,还可使用并列句、省略句及复合句(定语从句、名词性从句、状语从句),做到句式多样。 法宝3 黄金“三步曲” 1.遣词
hear from sb./tell sb.sth.about.../in detail/to begin with/be around the corner/be busy doing sth./prepare for/volunteer/be held at.../in order to/spend/in the library/no doubt/enhance/invite/appreciate
2.造句
(1)I’m so glad to hear from you.
(2)I am writing to tell you something about myself in detail.
(3)The final exam of this term is around the corner so I am busy preparing for it. (4)I have already been a volunteer for the 13th National Games. (5)It will be held at the end of August in Tianjin.
(6)In order to expand my knowledge of Tianjin,I spend every spare moment I have in the library.
(7)There is no doubt that I will enhance its reputation through my efforts. (8)I’ll appreciate it if you could reply at your earliest convenience. 3.成篇
Dear Mrs Green,
I’m so glad to hear from you.I am writing to tell you something about myself in detail.
To begin with,the final exam of this term is around the corner so I am busy preparing for it.What I want to stress is that I have already been a volunteer for the 13th National Games which will be held at the end of August in Tianjin.In order to expand my knowledge of Tianjin,such as its history,tradition and food,I spend every spare moment I have in the library.
There is no doubt that I will enhance its reputation through my efforts.I sincerely invite you to come here again.
I’ll appreciate it if you could reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours, Li Jin
(2016·天津)
假设你是晨光中学的学生会主席李津。一批来自英国的高中生与你校学生开展了为期两周的交流活动。现在,他们即将回国,你将在欢送会上致辞。请根据以下提示写一篇发言稿。
1.回顾双方的交流活动(如学习、生活、体育、文艺等方面); 2.谈谈收获或感想; 3.表达祝愿与期望。 注意:
1.词数不少于100;
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯; 3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。 Dear friends,
How time flies! Thank you. 参考范文 Dear friends,
How time flies!Two weeks went by,and our exchange activities ended.On behalf of my school,I would like to express my feelings.
As scheduled,we participated in several instructive activities.We learnt many Chinese characters and took plenty of exercise together.We went to the restaurant to taste the Chinese traditional food.The food was very delicious.While visiting the art exhibition,we discussed the great artists’ works.
In my opinion,everyone here is a member of our big family and we learn a lot from each other.And at last I sincerely wish you a pleasant trip back to your country.I hope we’ll get together again next year.
Thank you.
二、图画类作文
(2017·北京)
假设你是红星中学高三学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,记录毕业前夕你们制作以“感恩母校”为主题的毕业纪念视频的全过程。