专业英语八级(翻译)
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PART IV TRANSLATION
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过去,经济增长的根本动力在于技术,在于人才,现在,不同了——在于消费。没有消费,生产何用
?
以及一系列的中间环节——销售,运输,原材料供应等都失去了意义。然而,推动消费确非易事。若靠放
宽信贷条件,鼓励借贷刺激消费,事实证明,会引起通货膨胀,入不敷出,是不可持续的。最根本的,è¿?/p>
是要解决好他们的社会保险、医疗、养老等问题,使其没有后顾之忧,于是他们才能消费,才敢消费ã€?/p>
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Technology and talents, which used to be the dynamos for economic growth,
have
now
become
powerless;
consumption,
instead,
is
the
true
driving
force
for
the
economy.
Without
consumption, production and intermediate activities, such as marketing, transportation and
resource supply, would lose their meaning. However, promoting consumption is not an easy task.
Spending money obtained by easy credit from a government stimulation package has proved
inflationary,
debt-ridden
and
unsustainable.
Improving
social
security,
health
care,
retirement
system and so on, would be a comprehensive approach to eliminate people's worries, enabling and
encouraging them to consume.)
解析:解析:
1
.本文选自短文《“消费”的难题》,专业术语较多,应注意相关术语的准确翻译。原文短
句较多,句式零散,译文应根据文章的逻辑关系进行整合ã€?/p>
2
.第一句,对于“过去,……;现在,不å�?/p>
了”的句式,不一定要采用
in the past,
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now is quite different
...等译法,可将其意融合在
较为平叙的表达中,把“在于……”的介宾结构转换成主谓结构更符合英文表达习惯。“根本动力”可ç”?/p>
dynamos
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driving force
来表达。“现在,不同了”是指技术和人才并不像过去那样能强有力地推动ç»?/p>
济增长,可用
powerless
表达ã€?/p>
3
.“没有消费,生产何用
?
以及一系列的中间环节……意义”这里是用反
问语气强调消费的重要性。翻译时不妨以叙述形式译出。“一系列的中间环节”是指和生产和消费有关的
环节,破折号后是对这些环节的举例,可ç”?/p>
intermediate activities
,such as…表达ã€?/p>
4
.“若靠放å®?/p>
信贷条件……持续的”,表面看上去是一假设句,但实际上只是对这种情况的说明,不一定要用英文的å�?/p>
设语å¼?/p>
if
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supposing
等,不妨用动名词短语
Spending money
作主语表达得更为直白和肯定,句子译作
spending money obtained by easy credit from a government stimulation package has
provedinflationary
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debt-driven
and
unsustainable
。“引起通货膨胀,入不敷出,是不可持续的”是
动词结构ï¼?/p>
翻译时可转换词性,
全部转换成形容词ï¼?/p>
并列译为
inflationary
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debt-ridden
and
unsustainable
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显得铿锵有力,简洁明了ã€?/p>
5
.“最根本的”不一定是
the
most
fundamental
cause
,此处是指涵盖社保ã€?/p>
医疗和保险在内的综合举措,不妨译ä¸?/p>
the comprehensive approach
。“使其没有后顾之忧”可译为
to
eliminate people's worries
。“于是他们才能消费,才敢消费”是指采取以上措施的结果,直接用现在
分词短语后置作目的状语,译为
enablingand encouraging them to consume
,显得简单明了ã€?/p>
3.
海水那么近,
浪打上岸ï¼?/p>
飞溅起一地水花ã€?/p>
海潮汹涌ï¼?/p>
一波一波如各路驶来的轰隆火车,
那视觉,
听觉ï¼?/p>
触觉的震撼,瞬间要将人吞噬似的。坐在半颓倾的护栏水泥块上,看天色将暗之际由晕红转橘橙而灰蒙ã€?/p>
一轮光盘映照在海面上,我以为那是即将隐落的夕阳,转念一想,不对,那可是初升的月亮。天还透着æœ?/p>
胧亮光呢。近晚月色镶嵌在天海之间,像是谁刻意调了白色颜料画上的图案ã€?/p>
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The
sea
was
so
close
to
me,
waves
beating
the
shore,
one
splash
after
another.
The
surging
tides,
running
like
waves
of
roaring
trains,
were
approaching
me
from
all
directions.
The
shocking
sensation,
coming
over
my
eyes,
ears
and
body,
seemed
to
be
about
to
devour
a
person
instantly. Sitting
on the
half decadent cement block fence,
I saw the
darkening
sky
turning
from