Writing
Good writing must be
proper in style
complete in content
correct in grammar
changeable in expression
logical in arrangement
Example:
A proverb says
"Time is money". But in my opinion, time is even more valuable
than money. Wasted time can never be gained again. When money is spent, we can
earn it back. However, when time is gone, it won't return. This is the reason why we
must value time.
Introduction: to present ideas clearly
It goes without saying that the time we can use is limited. Therefore, even an hour
is extremely precious.
We should make full use of our time to do useful things. As
students we must make our efforts to engage in our studies so as to serve our country
in the future.
Supporting Details: to give necessary, persuasive reasons
In a word, we should form the good habit of saving time. Do not put off what can
be done today until tomorrow.
Conclusion: to sum up
Variety in sentences
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鍙ュ紡澶氭牱鎬э級
A proverb says "Time is money". But in my opinion, time is even more valuable
than money.
Wasted
time
can
never
be
gained
again.
When
money
is
spent,
we
can
earn
it
back. However, when time is gone, it won't return. This is the reason why we must
value time.
It
goes
without
saying
that
the
time
we
can
use
is
limited.
Therefore,
even
an
hour is extremely precious. We should make full use of our time to do useful things.
As
students
we
must
make
our
efforts
to
engage
in
our
studies
so
as
to
serve
our
country in the future.
In a word, we should form the good habit of saving time. Do not put off what can
be done today until tomorrow.
Coherence (
杩炶疮鎬э級
A proverb says "Time is money". But in my opinion, time is even more valuable
than money.
Wasted time can never be gained again. When money is spent, we can earn it back.
However, when time is gone, it won't return. This is the reason why we must value
time.
It goes without saying that the time we can use is limited. Therefore, even an hour
is extremely precious.
We should make full use of our time to do useful things. As
students we must make our efforts to engage in our studies so as to serve our country